Tuesday, June 16, 2009

Love,Life,Heartbeats and cell phone - 3


My hand reaches out earnestly in these times of confusion.
It dials the number of a familiar and calming voice ...
And gratefully, my lifeline to sanity ... remains intact. “

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- ( EXCLUSIVE SERIES BY Pulkit)


BEEP BEEP! Her phone vibrated!


( 1 new message from Him)


woh akele chal diye aur hum khade reh gaye
har baar ki tarah aansu aaj bhi beh gaye
humne yaad kiya unhe har lamha
aur unhone has k kaha -
yaad kiya sabko bas ek tum hi reh gaye”


She reads it. Thinks for a moment. Then Moves to lobby of her house and dials his number...


TRING TRING !! TRING TRING !!


Him – hello... ( in a dull voice!)

Her – what kind of a sms was that? (confused and innocent voice!)

Him – I just sent what I felt! (pissed off!)

Her – Ur upset regarding sometime... Dear!!!!! (pushing the word “dear” a little too long)

Him – yes! But what the hell difference does it make to you...(loud!)

Her – hey! What happened exactly (sheepishly!)

pause!!

Her – why are you shouting?

Him – I am not shouting!! (louder!!)

Her – yes you are! And that too without any reason? (plain voice! Straightforward!)

Him – I have my reasons to behave the way I am doing but...

Her – but what...

Him – but you wont understand it! So better not talk about that! (softly... decreasing the volume!)

pause again!!

Her – how was your day?

Him – what difference does it make to you?

Her – seemed as if you had a big fight with someone...

Him – no! Nothing of that sort...

Her – then...

Him – will U believe me if I will tell you that I missed you the whole day...

Her – hmmm...

Him – and the day before and the day before and the full week before... and...

pause!!

Her – hey! I am sorry for being out of touch for past couple of days dear! Was just a little busy....

Him – its 17 days... and you call me friend huh! (pissed off!)

Her – so sorry dear, I didn't knew that you would be bothered about me so much... I thought you yourself would have been busy!

Him – and what the messages... why dint you answered those?

Her – I usually answer them dear, might have missed a couple...

Him – 34 of them! One in the morning and one in the night every day! (in a sad tone!)

Her – hey! I had told you dear... not to expect much from me yaar!

Him – Its not expectations, I really dont mind you being busy with stuff... its just that...

pause!

Her – what?

Him – nothing! Leave it! (a deep breath after that!)

pause!

Her – we are just friends from last one month!

Him – why are you telling me that?

Her – I am sorry dear! I was not knowing that you take my being around so seriously...

Him – depth of friendship for me has less to do with time and duration and more to do with quality of time that two individuals spend together!

Her – I can see that very well, Thats why we are talking after such a long time and you had been fighting with me throughout the call...

Him – I was not fighting... it was just that... I wanted to let you know...

Her – what?

Him – nothing! Leave it!

Pause!!

Her – you are one god damn emotional fellow!

Him – emotional fool na!

Her – no! I never said that...

Him(silence!)

Her – I like emotional human beings and I am myself a very emotional girl !!

Him – hmmm....

Her – and you are the most emotional person that I have ever come across!

Him – you haven't seen much of the world anyways!

Her – more then you at least!

Him – huh!

Her – huh!

Him – I miss you a lot (smiles!)

Her – I will take care of that from now on dear! (smiles back!)

Her – bye dear! M sorry for the absence, will try not to repeat it, I promise!

Him – you should be more sorry for telling me that we are just newly bonded friends...

Him – cos I never treated you that way and will never do so too! (emotionally!!)

Her – missed ya too!

Him – smiles! ( a strange fast heart beat)

Her – bye! Tc! And dont be that emotional dear, thats an advice!

Him – thanks but keep it with you only!

Her – smiles! Bye!

Him – miss you!

Her – why? Just now we are talking na!

Him – Its actually...

Her – what?

Him – nothing! Leave it!


(cuts the phone!) [ call ended – 18 minutes , 34 seconds ]


BEEP BEEP! ( his phone vibrates!)

( 1 New message from her)


aapke sawalon ne humein is kadar uljha diya
ki jawaab hote huye bhi hum usse suljha na sake
diya tha jo waqt aapne humein...
us waqt mein hum,
lavz piro na sake...
kaash samajh paate khamoshi humari,
toh guftugu hum apni aage badhate”

Gn. tc Dumbo! :)


BEEP BEEP! (Her phone vibrates)

(1 new message from him)


ae khuda nazron ko kuch aisi khudai de...
jidhar dekhun bas woh hi dikhai de...
kaash koi aisi baat ho hawa mein...
usko pukarun to bas ussi ko sunai de”

Gn. tc! :)


She reads it three times and smiles! Closes her eyes thinking about him! “such a cute fellow he is”!!



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(Ps – do you actually believe in love at first sight? Or rather... love at first call? Or rather... Love at first sms? )

( PPs - teri yaadein, Mulakatein, woh raatein aur baatein... woh hawaon ki ghataein... mere dil Ko yaad aayein, tere bina mera jiya, sataye kyun piya, yaadon ne teri mujhpe ye jadoo kiya re... I MISS U A LOT!! )

25 comments:

PULKIT said...

dear readers
this one is a fascinating venture at my blog!
I dont know him and I dont know her..
but when I close my eyes and they start talking... they just reveal their world to me!!

with ocean of love
universe of blessings,
Pulkit

PULKIT said...

5 stars and two thumps up episode - 4 coming up!!

Arun Kumar said...

Very cute phone call.... especially the guy sayin "nothing ... leave it..." like umpteen times...
too bad i dunno hindi... didn't understand the sms es...

arshat.chaudhary said...

hey man! Lovely post.. Going through the rst of the posts too.. Keep writing :)

Irisha said...

oki..veryy nice post agn!! lovdd it...keepp wrtin!! tc :)

Pretty Me!! said...

awesome !! i just love reading you !!! :) !! @ps : i beleive in it ;)

Satans Darling™ said...

Such a sweet post!

dreamer said...

Sweet cute post.....enjoyed reading...especially the sms...Keep writing!!

Choco said...

Hey Pulkit!
No poems!?!
I loved the sms's...Very deep.
But don't you think the girl sounded fake? She said dear so many times!!! :)

Dhanya said...

What a sweet post :)

No, I don't believe in those love at first sights or smses or calls. First impression does matter, but have to know a guy more to fall in love with him :)

paramveer said...

unable 2 imagine such thing........but stimes conversation seems 2 be hyper dramatic.....baki sabb theek h.

pinkZz said...

lovely bro.. keep writin.....

i love these posts !

PULKIT said...

@ arun - hey! :) glad to have u back at my blog! u better learn hindi too bro... u miss a lot of stuff at my blog ever since I have started scribbling a lot in that language :)

PULKIT said...

@ ashrat - thanks for the visit bro!!
keep visiting!

PULKIT said...

@ Irisha - miss u a lot!! keep visiting pakke se! ur comments give me STRENGTH!
U MEAN A LOT TO ME...
thanks for eveyrything!!

PULKIT said...

@ pratsie - and I love being read by you...
frankly speaking when I think of days at louge gone by...I miss u the most!!

PULKIT said...

@ satan's darling - glad to have u back ashrita! keep visiting :)

PULKIT said...

@ dreamer - I am all so glad that u liked it dear :)

PULKIT said...

@ Choco - heyyyyyyy! thanks for being here again firstly...
thats the problem with this girl yaar...
she just tend to form a worng image of herself..but I can tell u.. she is not at all fake yaar! she is one real good human being :)

PULKIT said...

@ Dhanya - agree with u completely!! :)

PULKIT said...

@ paramveer - hyper dramatism!! its nessesary I tell u bro!! :) anyways I will try to sound more real the next time... but it would sound boring!! :(

PULKIT said...

@ Pinkzz - hey sis! love ya!! :) I know u like these .. it brings a loads of smiles to my face when I know that u love this :)
thanks!! keep visiting!!

priyanka said...

its lovely bhai .........very interesting...

PULKIT said...

@ priya - thanks sis! I am glad u liked it

jesus said...

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