Sunday, May 24, 2009

PERSONIFICATION



These lonely nights!
When the world sleeps,
in peace and delight...
I talk to this moonlight

I enchanter the lullaby
of this mighty moon
Trying meanwhile to wrap
myself In this dream's cocoon!


If this is a dream
then why Am I awake
I got to sleep right now
my pain would be at stake!

Cos In a few moments
the stars would take away
this only friend of mine.
Moonlight too would leave me astray!


Hard to face myself
harder to face you!
Leave my world of dreams
before your falseness flews!

Enough of your fake nests
your glow & shine is a cheat
You betray with false promises
and make me fall in your feet!

I hate you moonlight
but you are all I have!
In These lonely nights...
When the world sleeps!



YOU ARE MY WORLD MY HATE AND LOVE!
dedicated to the moonlight.... The cold rays of moon!

2:10 A.M. yet again sleepless night .... not any reason to moan but still missing the long lost pain...

32 comments:

Brosreview said...

Nicely written! However, I am not quite sure of this word - "flews". Re-check that!!!

Arun Kumar said...

nice poem...loved he lines..
I enchanter the lullaby
of this mighty moon
Trying meanwhile to wrap
myself In this dream's cocoon!
lovey...

paramveer said...

beautiful like moonlight...
btw pay attention to flews.......muje iska matlab ni pata..

Sam said...

wooooh lalala...

awesome lines man. the flow and the narration is too good.

dreamer said...

The poem is beautiful....enjoyed reading it...But I would like you to know why 'personification' as the title??

priyanka said...

hey pulkit very well described loved it as alwayssss.
hi Brosreview: well flew is a correct word, hey Pulkit correct me if i m wrong does flew means a man born unto troubles as sparks fly upward
and hi Dreamer well ans to ur qes whether personification is a corect title to go by or not may be yes ...well exact clarification can be given only by pulkit but personification signifies an artistic representation of an abstract quality or idea as a person which very well goes by the post ........

priyanka said...

hey pulkit i even loved the display attached god bless

PULKIT said...

@ brosreview - I have used the words flews only....

literal meaning of it is....

flews
Noun,

(def) =

the fleshy hanging upper lip of a bloodhound or similar dog

PULKIT said...

@ arun kumar - thanks a lot dear :)

PULKIT said...

@ paramveer - matlab likh diya hai upar comments mein....


:)

PULKIT said...

@ sam - thanks a lot brother :)

PULKIT said...

@ dreamer - as u already might be knowing .... the application of personification... it goes like this...

A description of an inanimate object as being a living person or animal as in: "The sun shone brightly down on me as if she were shining for me alone". In this example the sun is depicted as if capable of intent, and is referenced with the pronoun "she" rather than "it."....


here ===== if u notice....

the abstracts "I talk to this moonlight
(para 1), "I enchanter the lullaby
of this mighty moon"(para 2),
"the stars would take away; Moonlight too would leave me astray!" (para 3)
"Leave my world of dreams...(a speech to moonlight in para 4),
which is then continued in para 5 and 6 in direct phrase .... :)


so this goes for the justification of the title...

actually it is not purely just personification...
chracterization is also involved...as I am actually reffering to a person involved in my life by the title os moonlight :)


hope ur querry is clear :)

PULKIT said...

@ priya - ur such a sweetheart...love ya sis!

PULKIT said...

display is taken from a site called deviantart.... its fab sis!
do check it :)

Gauri Mathur said...

Good Work!!
Keep Empowering!
:)
Me too added in ur Follower list now!!
:-)

pinkZz said...

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PULKIT said...

@ gauri - smiles! :)

PULKIT said...

@ vedshree - il visit ur today positively :)

Ekam said...

Beautiful lines Pulkit :)

Anonymous said...

good poem pulkit!
nicely personified moon!
well done my friend!
regards..
riya.

Anonymous said...

good poem pulkit!
nicely personified moon!
well done my friend!
regards..
riya.

Priyanka said...

nice poem pulkit...first time visitor here! ;)

PULKIT said...

@ riya - thanks :)

PULKIT said...

@ riya - a comment repeated ???

PULKIT said...

@ priyanka - thanks for the visit dear !!
hope to see u here in future again :)
regards!

Preetilata【ツ】 said...

i loved it pulkit.

ahh moon! it is my ultimate lover. :)

nilima said...

simply awsome bhaiya ☺

Shravan said...

awesome pulkit, i loved the contrast in the beginning and the ending. nice composition, and i have personally felt the moon light as a ray of hope,for its always sure that the moon is going to be there and the light is also goin to be there, bright after its dark..

PULKIT said...

@ preetilata - :) smiles!

PULKIT said...

@ nilima - what to say to u! my sweetu

PULKIT said...

@ shravan - thanks for analyzing the thought so so deeply!
:)
hugs!

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