Wednesday, May 20, 2009

Scribbles of the heart

I walk alone
In a wait
for you to return....

My friends wonder why
I cannot see...
That The gate I longed to open
Is now closed forever....

"phir shaam mein tanhaai jaagi...
phir yaad tum aa rahe ho...
phir jaan machalne lagi hain!
kyun mujhko tadpa rahe ho....
kyun mujhko tadpa rahe ho....

The darkness have swallowed
the moonlight
My sun is set without you...
It would never rise!

"is din mein yaadon k mele hain...
tum bin bahut hum akele hain....
Aa jao... laut kar tum... ye dil keh raha hai...
***
I talk to you by my dreams
trying to figure out where was I wrong...
While they bury you deep...
Inside the calm of this land...

My happiness dies with you...
captured in closed wrist of your hand!
""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""

"Tum Bin jiya jaaye kaise....
kaise jiye jaaye tum bin...
sadiyon se lambi hain raatein
sadiyon se lambe huye din..."

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While
I
read these
beautiful

lines dip in love...
I feel you right here lying on my shoulder...
lines dwell in love have found sense from the moment I saw you

THANKS FOR MAKING ME REALIZE WHAT ONE FEELS WHEN ONE IS IN LOVE!
Where ever you are...
whatever you do

I am here thinking of you!
may you get all that you desire
success reaches you whenever you aspire!
When I see you there erupts a flame
and I burn from the heat of that fire!!


Sometimes separation .... Is The end Of Love and Sometimes... It is the start.... You might be gone To The heavens above...
But I love you more then ever, This world is no less then hell without you.... now!
Thanks for all the dreams at night of yours that keeps me going!

36 comments:

AD said...

aaaaaaaaaaaaahhh!!! i love love love only love :D
and your post made me wanna drown in it!

priyanka said...

nice pulkit....loved it

Brosreview said...

Heartfelt lines here, as always!!! Keep writing!!!

Sam said...

Awesome man. Great mix of Hindi and English words. Mushy stuff. Loved it.

yamini meduri said...

direct dil se....i liked each line Bro..!!!

dreamer said...

So much heady dose of emotions....I am just left speechless..... can't say much only that You made me feel what it must be to lose someone...

The mix of Hindi and English lines was really good.

PULKIT said...

@ AD - Thanks! for staying here... as far as I remmember... thats ur first visit and comment on my page!
well....
when fantasy and reality meet!
the result is LOVE!
:)

thats all I can disclose as for the source of my inspiration

PULKIT said...

@ priya - thanks sis!
:)

PULKIT said...

@ brosreview - :) hugs! thanks bro!
loved the word "as always..." in ur comment...
thats given a big smile on my face!

PULKIT said...

@ sam - hey dear! thanks a ton for coming back here and sppreciatin the work! meant a lot!

PULKIT said...

@ yamini - thanks a lot sis :)

PULKIT said...

@ dreamer - smiles! thanks dear! :)

pinkZz said...

lovely..!

Shravan said...

nice lines pulkit, though i hardly make out hindi :) loved the english lines :) keep going and rock

Shravan

fms1988 said...

Wowwwww :)
Lovely the way u blended "Tum Bin" song in was great & i loveeee that song :D

PULKIT said...

@ pinkzz - hey sweets! thank u!

PULKIT said...

@ shravan - thanks for commenting bro! love ur honest take as always... :)

PULKIT said...

@ fms1988 - inne din baad u came on my blog!
:)
m so so happpppppy

Phoenix said...

beautiful.... absolutely heart wrenching...

Gauri Mathur said...

Hey!
Nice:)

SAHITYIKA said...

hey.
nice combination of hindi and english poetry..
love is the best feeling in the world. .. and u got that.. really lucky. .. huh.. :)

Priya Joyce said...

so very niice...matches my mood too :)

Priyanka said...

dis ws so beautiful !!
loved d mix of songs...d tum bin song is one of my favs...

Preetilata【ツ】 said...

straight from the heart it was. loved the way u have interlinked with songs :)

Preetilata【ツ】 said...

somehow my blogroll dint get updated n thats y d delay.sorry dear.

i hv updated my blog after ages. waiting for u thr. :)

take care.. n keep amiling. :)

nilima said...

hhmm... superb! loved it.. so heart touchin lines.. n dat song is mah favv ..
n i feel dat love is d most beautifl thng in d whole universe.. love maks us feel lik flyin.. being in love is d mst beautiful part of one's lif.. love is everythng.. n wen love goes away dan lif seems to b worst dan hell or nethng.. n dis is d worst worst worst moment of one's lif.. n it lasts foreva n eva .. ☹

PULKIT said...

@ phoenix - thanks a lot for the appreciation!

PULKIT said...

@ gauri - hey! my new follower :)
regards! keep coming... :)

PULKIT said...

@ sahityika - beautiful name u have there!
:) smiles back!

PULKIT said...

@ joyse - hugs! m so glad to hear that

PULKIT said...

@ preetilata - just trying to do smthn diffrent with each post as always

PULKIT said...

@ prettilata - already commented dear!

PULKIT said...

@ nilima - m always there for u sis!
love u loads

neha said...

hey....i just love dat hindi poetic frm tum bin, its just too touching., awesome lines composed by u 2..loved it

PULKIT said...

@ neha - thanks a lot dear :)

SatyU said...

Kyu yaar app hamesha mujhe rulathe hoo? :(
Loved to the core :)

Takecare