Monday, May 25, 2009

अल्फाज़ - 2 (Chandni Raatein)


(English Script)

Tu pass hai toh is raat ki chandni mein roshani hai
har sitara hai roshan har chirag mein loah thami hai!
Jo tu nahi saath toh chandni ka aksh bhi dhundla hai
Har sitara hai madham har chirag ke pass andhiyara hai!

Jin ishaaron pe jugnuaon se aati thi hansi is chehre pe
unhi ko dekh ke dukh se dub dubati hai ab aankhein
har aanso ke peehche bhi ek yaad ka kasoor hai
us yaad ke saath bhi juda tera aur sirf tera hi noor hai!

Phir aanson ke baad laut ti hai muskaan is chehre par
ek masoom se khwab ne akhir diya sahara hai
us khwab mein bhi tere hi saath ka nazara hai
Jagmagati chandni hai aur phir roshan har sitara hai!

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(Hindi alfaaz)

तू पास है तोह इस रात की चांदनी में रोशनी है
हर सितारा है रोशन हर चिराग में लोः थमी है!
जो तू नहीं साथ तोह चांदनी का अक्ष भी धुन्दला है
हर सितारा है मद्धम हर चिराग के पास अँधियारा है!

जिन इशारों पे जुगनुओं सी आती थी हंसी इस चेहरे पे
उन्ही को देख के दुःख से डूब डूबती है अब आँखें
हर आंसू के पीह्चे भी एक याद का कसूर है
उस याद के साथ भी जुड़ा तेरा और सिर्फ तेरा ही नूर है!

फिर आंसुओं के बाद लौट टी है मुस्कान इस चेहरे पर
एक मासूम से ख्वाब ने आखिर दिया सहारा है
उस ख्वाब में भी तेरे ही साथ का नज़ारा है
जगमगाती चांदनी है और फिर रोशन हर सितारा है!

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(My second attempt at hindi poetry here @ PCIP ( Poetic cries of interpersonal expressions... and carrying on with the same theme around which my life dwells these days... that is lonely nights)




Dont ever leave me.... please! Beg u....

18 comments:

paramveer said...

"har aanso ke peehche bhi ek yaad ka kasoor hai"

able to connect with this 1.
gud work..

fms1988 said...

Well written :)

Sam said...

hindi poetry ka ek junoon hai, ek nasha hai. and is blog par wo nasha aur tej ho jata hai dude.

likhte raho...pasand aayi :P

Phoenix said...

beautiful words... i so loved it

and thank you for english script for the essence would have lost if i had to struggle to decipher the hindi script!!

The Pink Orchid said...

beautiful

PULKIT said...

@ param - trying to write from the bottom of my heart these days

dreamer said...

Well written....very beautiful....Trust me you should continue doing this more often...You are quite good in it!!
applaud!!:):):)

PULKIT said...

@fms - thanks!

PULKIT said...

@ sam - hey bro! thanks a ton! gave me a big motivation to write more

PULKIT said...

@ phoenix - i was hoping that... thats why I have added the english scrapit alongside!
:)

PULKIT said...

@ pink orchid - m glad that u liked it!! :)

PULKIT said...

@ dreamer - thanksssssss a lot dear!
:) :) :) applaud gladly recieved with grattitude!
:)
smiles!

Thanks for the motivation

priyanka said...

kya baat hai its absolutely amazing bhai very well written

PULKIT said...

@ priyanka = thanks a lot sis!
:)

nilima said...

bahut aachi he.. loved d last para.. juz fab..!! love yu!

salman said...

hvnt seen one of these people leaving comment in your blog writing sumthing negative :P

sach batau...it was avg yar :P

but as it is part of first few attempts to you are going good...try n include total urdu words...it becomes too good...m not promoting my language here...i just like it when it comes to poems n songs :)

PULKIT said...

@ nilima - love u sis! thanks!

PULKIT said...

@ salman sir - i know most people dont criticize me and thats why ur comments play a special role in my inprovement.... ie If its takin place!
m workin hard sir!
will try to come up with something good soon