Sunday, March 22, 2009

THE PRINCESS LOVE STORY

Long time back in a town
where the sun never use to set
lived a beautiful princess
who usually remained depressed!

She was as beautiful as a rose
her long hairs and pink cheek
mystifying beauty of her eyes
was all that poets of her time speak



a prince had left her ditched...
he went back to his city of Thames
without telling her and out of sudden
he broke his promises and claims!

She had a smile on her face
to show to the world
but deep within herself
she was a broken girl!


No love exists in this world
she had made up her mind
regret trusting someone for once
she wanted the time to rewind!

A day when she was walking
in gardens of her palace
she met a poor gardener
who wore glasses & smile on face!



In giving water to suffering dead plant
they became good friends within days
he was boring,strange, poor and weak
yet for her,his jokes left smile and gaze!

Hand in hand roaming and cheering
she started liking him from heart
but somewhere in her was a fear
will this be another painful start?



On moonlit night they met again
she wanted to say something but stopped
looked in his eyes within the spectacles
and a few tears from her blue eyes dropped!

The boy hugged her tight and tried
to catch each of those falling tears
and before she could say a word
he held her hand and made it clear



he would love her more and more
with each of his passing breath
his commitment for her would never change
until the day he submits to death.

She lost words when trying to reply
deep in his eyes she stared
embracing him then is her arms
they dissolved into love & care.



In years to come and seasons to go
His promises stood the test of time
He filled her life with all he could
The love he showed was truly divine.

When she was sad,He made her smile
singing & dancing in love for her
but pity in the face of this loyal lover
harsh destiny had other things to offer.


A horse stammered those streets again
the English prince returned to that shore
handsome & smart,in glory of his class
now had jewels, throne and much more.

He went to the father of princess
and asked for his old beloved hand
king was humble to have this offer
but left choice on her own stand.


leaving a poor hand,she held the other
the boy was shocked,broken & shattered!
She left him with no reasons
broken pieces of his heart he gathered.

She went back to her past
forgetting all she got within a second
how selfish was her own happiness?
The boy still wondering what happened!

The royal wedding took place
in midst of his tears and questions
princess never replied to his letters
soon settling in English mansions.

In fury of heartbreak and immense pain
he cried on as days changed to night
sobbing a chest filled with strain
he laid to death on god's might!



Not for once he cursed her
how true was his love?
Still prayed on for her happiness
even heaven's cried from above.

The love is pure, its never blind
as they always call it to be
we people don't have eyes instead
love dies in wait for us to see!!


- PULKIT TIWARI
(18 march 2009, 03:47)




83 comments:

PULKIT said...

dearest readers of my blog,
I had always wanted to write a poem about a story, A narrative rhyme description of something, hopefully this post comes up as a fullsilment to that long ages back made commitment to myself! :)
Lord Ullin's daughter read by me long back in class 9th! written by thomas campbell, had been my inspiration for this, I dont remember it much but all I know is that it had always been there somewhere at the back of my mind from the day I read it, sometimes as a poem, sometime as a story... I want the same effect to happen to the readers of "princess love story". an easier understanding verse coming from my end after "dreaming attrocious atonement", which I had later explain in its respective comment box!
hope you will enjoy reading this long, but I believe a fast read poem!
please let me know through your comments what u felt like after reading this,,,,

with ocean of love & universe of blessings
ur best friend and most honest wellwisher
PULKIT
(pulkit.tiwari@gmail.com)

shagun said...

hey bhai wnt a love stry...felt bd 4 d boy...i hope i 2gt a man lk him...juz lovd it..gr8 job bhai wel done..shagun

paramveer said...

simply the best............
poem in itself telling everything....
pleasure in reading this......

PARAM
bveer.blogspot.com

PULKIT said...

@ shagun - thanks for the comments again sweety! u have become one of the most regular here at this page :)

@ param - glad to have ur comments again bro!

kaveri said...

Hi Pulkit...found yur name different @ blog catalog....gone through yur profile, which was also different...!read yur posts...they also sound different and extrodinary....!gr8...was very much impressed by yur words...!kudos!!!

Do continue with yur fabulous work!

regards...
kaveri

www.kalakkal-kirukkalgal.blogspot.com

PULKIT said...

@ kaveri - thanks for the comments dear!
"different" is the most likeable adjective that my ears adapt to! it always brings a smile on my face! thanks a lot , :D
keep visiting!

anusha said...

luv it! luv it! really felt bad for that boy. the poem was really sweet n nice. the poem unfolded well and the emotions were brillant.

PULKIT said...

@ anusha - thanks for the visit lawyer sahiba! glad to have u back at my page:)
keep visting!

Ekam said...

Simple & sweet.Loved it. Nice concept. A story in a poem.Keep writing.God bless you :)

Anonymous said...

heyy dear the staggering work u r producing and that to this frequently i hve a firm beleif that poet within u has turned 20 n not ny more 19 ,ny wayz this time i undrstood it and hve a clear silhoutte ..........listed blogger seems to be on a go!!!!!!!!!!!!! :):)
ur everlovn bro-
faraz.

PULKIT said...

@ thanks eku! for the visit and the comments.. missed u in the comment box in the last post too dear!

@ faraaz bhaijaan - :) thanks a bucket lot , muaaaaah!

kartikey said...

heyyy pulkit..........i'm really proud to have a best friend like you..........you have done an amazing amazing amazing job bro.......i loved this one by heart........it is the best one to b evr written on ur blog...... u r improvin ur stuff day by day.........i loved it again!!!!!!!

Beloved Dreamer said...

This was quite good Pulkit. It was a story within a story win a story. Very moving but as you must know, life is unfaithful to all.

love-bd

Anonymous said...

An emotional saga.Must read for those who are in love and also for the stone hearted.
Saurabh

dreamer said...

nice...your muse seems to be quite active now a days,hope it continues like that.....Hated the cold selfish beauty but loved the story...Looking forward for your next post!!

Anonymous said...

it was too lovely... n vry true also.. infact it reflects d true picture of our selfish society n its ppl.. dis beautiful poem seems to gve a moral also... n d moral goes lik dis..''one who loves,has to pay for it''.. isn't it??
well.. feelin vry bad for dat helples boy.. he really made me cry.. n i truly hate dat gal..
at last.. i wud lik to tell u dat it was a gr88888888888 wrk bhaiya.. n i really loved it.. dis poem is one of mah fav nw.. n mah ''pullu bhai'' is much much much bettr dan thomas Campbell...i too hav read dat poem writtn by him.. bt urs is mch bettr.. love u :-)... mwah..!! mwaah..!! mwah..!!

mety..

Anonymous said...

ur a true "ROCKSTAR"... mah brother.. proud of u.. mwah..!! ur truly talented.. may god bestow al his blessings on u.. love u..

mety..

PRANSHU said...

again a marvellous post........thz one z awefully awesome!!!....da last lines r da best part of it....da misconception about love is made clear...gr8 work keep it up!!!

Irisha said...

oki nice post agn..lovd it..bt ending acchi ni thi..huhhh!!! here shld b lik dt GURL GET ALNG WIT DAT SPECTZ GUYYY..czz nw a dayzz it happnz lk i suggstd u .....
tc ...good wrk!!

khushi said...

hey pulkit....great poem dear....wonder if love is just another name of pain....

the story was good....liked it, but felt li'l depressing....over all great work :)

mini said...

simply g8 yaar............
u r a excellent writter dear.......
but the ending was nt gud yaar it shud hve nt happnd with tht poor guy..........

Hemant said...

Hey Pulkit. a truly realistic situation, put by u in words, so amazingly.

uzma said...

hey dear pulkit.. wat should i say.. m speechless... th poem itslf is unique... it seemz i knw princss..prince n the gardener...
excellnt peice f work...
well i guess... th princess will choose th gardner... it has soo mch pain in it..
its shwzz hw mch xtent u cn b in love.. loadz f love... hope u get wateva u wish....

PULKIT said...

@ kartikey - oye! u dont know bey, what ur positive comments means for me bro! getting appreciation from u is soooo big achievement for me :D
glad u liked it rockstar! :)
keep coming back to my blog, I always need ur advice bey!

@ beloved dreamer - thanks for ur firt visit to my page! glad to have a talented person like u in my comment box dear! keep visiting! I always need vision from people like u!

PULKIT said...

@ saurabh bhaiya - thanks for the visit and the comments bro!

@ dreamer - beauty can be a deception a lot many times in life :) thats my perspective! anyways, thanks for enjoying my activeness... just trying to work hard here! :) keep visiting nainika!

PULKIT said...

@ mety - hey sweety! thanks for visit again and comment again!I love u and need ur appreciation at all corners of my life honey :)

@ pranshu - hey bro! welcome to blog! keep visitin and keep commenting! ur one of my inspiration for me to write... Ur life that it!
:D

PULKIT said...

@ irisha - hey charu! thanks for finally coming to my blog! :) read ur comments, typical irisha types! always teeling me her view! and I love it all the time.. he he he! ur way of suggesting things is very cute! do wait, Il post an optimistic poem on love too, very soon dear!

@ khushi - thanks for the visit again sis!
missed u on blog page and comment box!
glad that u enjoyed the post yaar!

PULKIT said...

@ mini - heyyyyyyyyyyy u on my blog????
m very happy! thanksssssssssss!
a lot yaaaaaaaaaar! for coming, and commenting too! M very very happy mini!

@ hemant - thanks for ur first visit to my blog dear! keep visiting and keep commenting!

PULKIT said...

@ uzma - hey uzzi! welcome back to blog dear!
thanks for the comments... M so happy to have touch the chords of ur soul from my work, a comment from u is my biggest reward ir gift from ur end! he he he... do visit again!

FishHawk said...

Wow, what a story. I wish it had a much happier ending, but it is still an awesome story. Lovers of Shakespeare and classic Greek tragedies will undoubtedly love this.

rishabh said...

wow bhiya its just awesome..!
its very very good..poem..it is really heart touching poem..!
cant expres my views..!
while readin..i was in tears but.....then i left the page i read it again..and statred ur comment again ..


"♥ ♥ "



he was boring,strange, poor and weak

one thing..if he was..in love..then he is having most..interesting and..priceless + expensive thing in the world..!

LUv u bhiyaa,.!
RISHABH ♥

PULKIT said...

@ fishhawk - thanks for the visit dear! hope to see u here again and thanks for rating my blog as very intresting in ur ratings at ur own blog!

@ rishab - thanks for the comments bro! love u a lot!

Pratham said...

Its marvelous....i jus realized as if it happens wid me ..u ppl also try to do d same ... it is so touching .. it really hurts...
love is neva been smooth sailing ...
dis is sad bt dats wht v call TRUE LOVE
really gr8 man ...

Anonymous said...

nilima thnx a tone..... all credit goes to u ..
its was so touching ..
u sent me dis wonderful link ... n nw i m gonna fwd it to all mah network...
i really feel so bad for dat guy ... ummmm....
bt i believe jo hota h ache ke liye hota h ...
so JUS HOPE FOR D BEST

Pratham said...

nilima thnx a tone..... all credit goes to u ..
its was so touching ..
u sent me dis wonderful link ... n nw i m gonna fwd it to all mah network...
i really feel so bad for dat guy ... ummmm....
bt i believe jo hota h ache ke liye hota h ...
so JUS HOPE FOR D BEST
~~~PRATHAM aka pRw

Anonymous said...

helle pulkit bhai
poem is really good
mazza aagaya
i was told abt ur blog by
ur sis nivedita
i also sent a frnd req bt u refusesd
really ur poem is just
how a misynderstanding
and how twas eleminated

PULKIT said...

@ pratham - thanks for the heart warming appreciation!! hope to see u again here at my page in future! keep visiting bro!

@ anonymous - thanks for the visit and the comments, will try to talk to nivedita mam to ask about u, pls post ur name along with anonymous comment, the next time u comment pls!
will try to send u a frn request myself at orkut now! tc god bless!

zafar's world said...

cud say in simple word..sweet and simple...gud wrkk dude..keep it upp...god bless ya!!

PULKIT said...

@ zafar sir - thanks !! :)
keep visitn back sir.. always needs ur support and direction!

riya singh said...

nice piece of work!
the end was tragic,but thats how it is..
i liked it a lot!
keep writing my friend!

PULKIT said...

@ riya - thanks for the visit and comments deary! :)

neha said...

" we people dnt hav eyes instead, love dies in wait 4 us to see"...is very much true.. its most of d tym dat v dnt cm to noe, bt our true love is wid us, n how poor v r dat v dnt cm 2 noe abt it n v keep on searching 4 it!!!!
feeling so pity 4 ourselves...

n yeah, 4got 2 ask...
hav u written dis in reference 2 someone( as ur experience)?? do tell if any....

neha said...

a genuine story bt wid a bad ending....
an appreciable work done by u again.
keep writing ....

god bless u!!!

PULKIT said...

@ neha - as far as personal account of life is concerned... the positive is being in habit of writing is to share everything and anything, a story or a poem or an article, without vicualizing the line between fact and fiction! as far as I remember, tracing back to each and every post on this blog, each and every line of this post and every other god damn word written on this blog is related to me, related to things aroung me, related to people and events areound me...!!
I write what I conclude from all that mostly and at time when I'm personally facing those lessons leart from life!
keep visitn and commenting neha! thanks:)

priyanka said...

loved it ....really very nice..expressions are so nicely potrayed what to say u again made me speechless but felt bad for the boy....nice poem

PULKIT said...

@ priyanka - love sis! was waiting for u in comment box! thanks :)

Anonymous said...

well pulkit the poem touches the heart ,, the pain grief ..but plz dont mind caz criticism also make work better ..althogh m duffer .even not a critic ..but u know this poem is lesser good than you usually write ..

PULKIT said...

@ anonymous - thanks for visit! will try to improve , pls leave ur name after comment everyone! criticism or appreciation is fine but pls leave ur name so that i'm aware of who's visiting !!
:)

neha dhamija said...

It was beautiful and i can relate to it very well--well done again Pulkit

PULKIT said...

@ neha - thanks a lot dear!

The Sharma Ji said...

its gud...really touchin...

PULKIT said...

@ sharma ji - thanks sir! for the visit and comments! keep visiting.. and yeah! nice user name u have chosen.. he he! respect comes automatically!

Salman said...

if this is actually urs pulkit..then try getting it published sumwhere..

I mean I don't know where...but it has all the ingredients to get published in some poems book...i mean something which we used to read while in class 9th 10th etc

fr the first time...nothing negative frm my side :)

u were sweet n simple this time

PULKIT said...

@ salman sir - thanks!

Brosreview said...

Fantastic!!! You have undoubtedly taken a while to put this on paper. I can feel this one quite closely!!! Great job!!! Keep writing!!!

PULKIT said...

@ brosreview... thanks a lot!

RV said...

again..i read it ..!
i love this poem..!
mwahhh!

Miss Sunshine said...

that was so cute and simple! loved it :)

pinkz said...

i loved it....

Ms said...

how can any1 b so heartless??! bt d poem is astounding.. n vry differnt 2! i'v neva cum acros such a poem b4! gud wrk! ;)

-Miss Serenity (Madhavi)

Jyoti said...

Wow.. what a touching storyline. Very nice.

Frankly, i could relate myself to the first half of it.

But, no discussions :)

Good work.

Priyanka Agrawalla said...

Nothing less than the excellence! Fantastic, poignant though...

PULKIT said...

@ RV - thanks again dude!!

PULKIT said...

@ miss sunshine - Thanks a lot apurva!!

PULKIT said...

@ Pinkzz - thanks a lot vedu!!

PULKIT said...

@ miss serenity - thanks a lot madhavi!!

PULKIT said...

@ Jyoti - thanks for liking it dear!
and as u said...no furthur discussions :)

PULKIT said...

@ Priyanka - thanks a lot for liking it dear!!

The Aspirant said...

Bro ur words r really mystical......
they leave me spellbound.......
thanx fr writing, no not writing but designing dis beautiful post......

hats off to u again......

Satyu said...

I consider this to be the best post :)
Jus loved it.
Tears have trickled out of my eyes.

You are awesome. :)

Salil said...

buff.....honestly on my side this one is very very.......superficial..I did not like this one.....no offense....and it is kinda...production of a mind inspired by betrayals and more.....too similar to too many other poems....and stories on your blog as well as by so many other poets........no shock value...could be easily ignored.....

now onwards I would comment only on those articles I liked the most

PULKIT said...

@ The aspirant - Thanks yaar. Ur comments are such a motivation :) always

PULKIT said...

@ satyu - aww! thanks yaar. U gave ur heart into reading this :)

PULKIT said...

@ salil - Baap re! tuney toh pathar hi maar diya :P

DrEaMy PrInCeSs said...

really nice. :D
i love poems like these..

antara dutta said...

hai dat was a really really painful ending...
loved it

antara dutta said...

dat was a beautiful .&.. painfull love story..
loved it........

Anonymous said...

Speaking frankly, you are absolutely right.

Anonymous said...

Certainly. So happens. We can communicate on this theme.

Anonymous said...

Willingly I accept. The question is interesting, I too will take part in discussion. Together we can come to a right answer.

sweta said...

hey . . . .i jst came across ur blog . . by mistake . .. but god .. . a mistake i well loved. . .the words u have woven . .. cnt forget them .. . d stories bring tears to d surface ... thanks fr doin such a gteat work . . hope u keep on doin tht .. .n im happy tht im alive to read ur work ... .very well done pulkit. . :))

Neeha said...

I don't have words for this pulkit.
Your writings touch a lot.
But that's unfair for the princess,hope any such stories doesn't occur

phineas.abhinav said...

Hats off pulkit U r always amazing, i knw that thing back in my mind earlier i am serious u deserve this !!!!! u r blessed Anyways i still have lot to read lol !!!!