NOTE 1 - The selection of this pic is to portray the amazing smell of hairs of the protagonist to whom this prose is dedicated to. :) he he he... its amazing how they smell in those days when she puts on a clutcher and leaves them free!
How many times do you meet someone which you like for no specific reason, which captures your fantasies and you love to just being a silent observer to that soul. Love to stare her small small activities without letting anyone know that you are doing so. But just when you start talking to him or her and in between the translation from acquaintance to friendship, you draw a conclusion that the other person lacks the art of talking, the sense of being funny, the expression of being humorous, the satire to be witty! Her beauty is just a cover but within it she is not the kind of girl you expected her to be...
Every possible external beauty is bestowed by nature in her but she fails to talk the way you imagined her to be when you never talked to her. This is a prose about one such girl...
NOTE 2 - The prose coming ahead is highly exaggregated with less justice to facts and more focus on the flow as always!
your hairs are silk
your gestures are cool
your skin is milk
which made me a fool
I watched you silently
from creeps of your shadows
dreaming of just being able
to talk to you once.
Fir ek Din maine aapse baat kari
aur khud se hanste huye bola...
Aapki khata
bas itni si hai
ki aapko baatein banana
nahi aata
mohabbat mein hum
jab marte se hain
toh zindagi bachana
nahi aata
jazbaaton ko jab
juban ki ho jarurat
toh nagmey sunana
nahi aata
ruthun jab main
itraate huye
toh natkhat manana
nahi aata
aapke deedaar ki
pyaas se tadapta hun
tab paani pilana
nahi aata
meri palkon se
girte aansuon ko
hatheliyon se uthana
nahi aata
aapki beintehaah mohabbat ko bayan
aapki khoobsurat aankhein kar deti hain
par khud ke madhosh khyalon ko
aapko dil tak jatana nahi aata
aapki khata bas itni si hai
ki aapko baatein banana nahi aata
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I was awarded these three amazing and highly inspirational awards by my amazing friends Ekam (congrats on your first award! M so so proud of ya as always), Shravan (Love u bro, u have a kind heart) and Dreamer! ( Congrats to u on ur 2nd blog anniversary),Thanks to all of ya! I am sorry for not being able to entertain the attached tags to these awards due to shortage of time right now but will soon try to take them up , if not on PCIP then definately on My Other blogs! MUAAAAAAAH! I love u all for shooooooo sweet awards!
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28 comments:
I wish to write something in collaboration with a friend soon!
perhaps its time... that PCIP go for its first TAG and first GUEST POST in the days coming ahead...!
I wish that Dhanya someday writes a guest post for PCIP on some special occasion!! hmm... lets see if someday this desire of mine comes true or not!
M badly missing friends from blogsworld like freelancer, arun kumar, brosreview and other loyal blogger readers of PCIP who are not so regular now :(
I am happy to witness the return of one of the most amazing writers I ever came across in this forum of expression!
finds myself lucky enough to be reading her again!
i liked the post...reading any blog post after a long time!!....
i know one of my frnd who is so introvert kind of persona that despite of being one of toppers in the class,she lack her expression....sory!,i mean,she doesn't lack her expressions but some how she cant show them!!...n it creates so many problem for her talent!!!
btw...pulkit!...nice work!.....
n i m annoyed to you! u were not here for about more than 1 month n u didnt missed me!!....no contact huh!!...chal thiik h!......best of luck .....n congo for 110 follwers!!....
DISTINCTLY YOURS
PARAM
Hey bro, it's really joyful to have you back. This post, particularly,is awesome. You wrote what really happens with all of us(spl me!). I am rejoiced to make such acts .........
anyways, apart from all the hectic schedule you have , it's really worth commenting that you simply rock..
i wish i could give an award like , best time utilizer/
will wait for your reply
cheers
rohit
hey bro , its really joyful to have you back. this post, particularly, is awesome. you have written what actually happens .(spl with me)..
well its worth commending that you come up with such wonderful poems even when you aree tormented the day in and day out with the hectic schedule. I wish i could award you with "best time utilizer "!
howz it?
reply soon
take care
cheers
rohit
hey bro , its really joyful to have you back. this post, particularly, is awesome. you have written what actually happens .(spl with me)..
well its worth commending that you come up with such wonderful poems even when you aree tormented the day in and day out with the hectic schedule. I wish i could award you with "best time utilizer "!
howz it?
reply soon
take care
cheers
rohit
Neat, romantic, and true from the heart!
Good one for a pal..:)
Congrats to the award winners and so sweet of you to acknowledge that..:)
I love the english prose more than the hindi one, not that I didn't understand but I felt it when I read the initial lines....;)
Keep writing dude!!
dear..u write very very well!!
"meri palkon se girte aansuon ko uthana nahi aata" loved it!
everytime i come here..i fall short of words to comment..
Take care!
hi,...as always loved it,... it was fantastic, fabulous.... u know it I always fall short of words after reading ur work.......would just say loved it
Well bhai waiting for ur next post ......post it soon....GOD BLESS
Its one of my most favourite songs. I can listen to it at any time. Beautiful song
very well written... when time permits... kindly drop in to my page as well... thanx
Welcome back. I was away for a while and could not catch up. But loved this one. It was a mixture of everything. keep writing. and what I like expcept the posts you have other things extra also in ps and pps:-)keep writing and keep smiling.
@ param - sorry for not being able to stay in touch for whole of past month!
and thanks for the wishes! 110 is just a number, I am still struggling to built in regular readership by a long margin, what I aspire it to be, that is!
@ rohit - thanks a ton for the motivation bro!! do call me up soon ... :)
missin u!!
@ rohit - ur comment repeated :P
@ rohit - lol.. :D phir se! m happy thrise!!
@ Fiducia - ur a gem of a reader deary! thanks for being always so suggestive and caring!!
@ swati - I dont know what to say dear! I am so so blessed by ur kind words dear!
thanks for being a gentle reader :) Hope to be good friends with u soooooon! :)
tc god bless!
regards!
:)
@ priyanka - hugs!!
@ priyanka - will post it tonight :)
@ ekam - tera mera taste bahut milta hai yaar!!
@ NJ - Visiting ur blog right away bro.. for sure !! :)
@ Butterfly thoughts - thanks! :) for the comments :)
I loved ur blog seriouslly...loved this post too :)
i was left with tears in my eyes..i cant put my tears in words..for as much uno me i hope u'll undersatnd..
incredible
luv ya!
@ an ordinary gal - m honored :)
@ anu di - :) I am moved by the fact that u read my work with so much of soul
It is never a doubt coz dis fact is aprt of our lyf many a tyms, especially one person xactly matches d one u mentioned here.. :P
but truth is truth
gud poetry.....
cheers
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