This is in continuation to my previous post on this blog, carrying it on from where I left....
Somewhere In between a kiss!Your
smell
Is such..
I wonder,
Delights of its taste!
Are we moving in the right direction?
What's a vice and What's a virtue, I wont be able to judge!
I am just a human soul at the peak of my sensual touch!
Wishing you to dissolve within me'
Knowing that its nothing
More for world,
Then just...
a
sin!
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Eyelashes rested to peace
a serenity of naughtiness
a silence of speech
a desire of a temptation
matching to the tip
a counterpart tongue!
Wet and mingling
playing like strings
thy petals of rose
shimmering dewy lips
Resting on waist
numb fingers
expression of closed eyes
an everlasting trust
ek ehsaas
ek kashish
ek junoon
ek sukoon
ek nasha
ek maza
ek khwaish
ki ye pal thamey na!
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Epilogue
The moment eternal - just that and no more -
When ecstasy's utmost we clutch at the core
While cheeks burn, arms open, eyes shut, and lips meet!
~ Robert Browning
( PS - trying to get back in the nitch on blogging! The initial FIB is taken directly from my previous work @ Writer's louge! I have received two blog awards lately, I would be blogging about them in my next post! Take care everyone and god bless, thanks for the support and for being there with me in my journey of blog always )
23 comments:
a story!
a hindi poem
scribbles and many more..
in the days to come!
with ocean of love
universe of blessings
PULKIT
Ah !!! thats beautiful..
joolliiieesss:-)
oh so beautiful ;-)
superbly done mate :) cheers :)
lovely..u described it beautifully..
bt u know what..a kiss without a hug is like a flower without fragrance..i read it somewhere..:)
i get to read both hindi n english write ups in the same post..thats the best part..n both of them are always amazing.
Goodday!
good going!
Nicely written Pulkit! Nice to have you back in the blogging world! :)
Well well..
Some deep sensuous lines written from the heart, eh!
Looks like a lot of research went into the making of those lines ;)
Gud job!!
Loved the initial temple effect..:)
Verses were just tickling my senses of lust and romance...:)
I agree to what 'swati' said ... and yeah, a kiss is a combination of all that and more...Emotional, yet exciting!
Nice read...Keep writing and waiting to see more of both, your english poems and hindi likhath...;)
Very very nicely written. anyone could feel it..
Awesome bro...........it seems u hv tried kisin these dayzzzz.......(jst kidin)
seriously yar,matlab mazza a gya padh kr.....xclnt
god bless you!!!!!
@ escapist - :) thanks!
@ raaji - thanks for the read and visit again :)
@ shravi - hey shravan! will u mind if Il call u shravi, thanks a lot for liking my work again bro! meant a lot :) as always!
@ swati - thanks for being so regularly and so heartfeltly reading my work :)
blessed to have readers like ya!
@ anu di - :)
just goin on with the feel...
@ dhanu - :) feels good to back and being in touch with awesome frns like u dhani :)
@ shruti - not the research actually, but a planned thought process ... the pics helped a lot :)
@ fiducia - I would repeat what I replied to swati! its just amazing and an utmost honor to have connected readers like u dear!
thanks for being there! :)
@ pinkzz - :) thanks sis!
@ swati - thanks a lot sis! its awesome having u here in my blog too :)
thanks for reading me!!
it was awesome loved it as always enjoyed it ...........god bless bhai
@ priyanka - thanks sis:)
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