पिछली रात की वोह रूहानी कशिश...
तेरे जिस्म में मेरी साँसों की वो लहर!
खिड़कियों से जर - जर बरसता...
कुदरत की उन बूंदों का वो कहर!
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(PS - A new start .... my very first post here at poetic cries .... In a language that I almost never liked when I was in school... No not sanskrit, I Hated it... here I have mentioned the word "never like"....
But then again in life .... you never know when this "never" ends out of sudden.... :) Uncertainty & exploration in new avenues is what makes it worth living!
12 comments:
ah baarish aur aashiqui - the most intoxicating combination ever..
you portrayed it well, Pulkit..
thanks for the appreciation kajal!
I am very cautious in the approach... may be baby steps... thats why wrote something small...I dont have confidence of expression here in this language
and thanks for the appreciation :)
meant a lot!
it was a deadly combination of rain and romance.
very beautifully expressed.
congratulations for this new start. :)
ultimate man. i love hindi poetry. not many of us can write. u got it dude.
fantacilicious (my creation).
added u up mate :)
@ preetilata - thanks deary! :)
smiles back to ya!
@ sam = hey bro! thanks a ton for the motivation...just as I said to kajal... same goes here again...
comment and appreciation on this initial phase meant a lot :)
nice...beautiful..!!!
@ yamini - thanks for the comments sis!
kk...can i write the word seksie here??..:)
so toxic lines......
hope to c more in the same lango!!
oh gosh! pullu bhaiya n hindi.. he he he.. i knw u ne'er liked hindi wen u wer in schul.. bt neways u've writtn vry nicely..!! mwah!
@ param - sure! more coming soon...
@ nimila - hugs to ya metu!
miss u loads
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