Monday, May 18, 2009

अल्फाज़!! ... ( एक नई शुरुआत..)


पिछली रात की वोह रूहानी कशिश...
तेरे जिस्म में मेरी साँसों की वो लहर!
खिड़कियों से जर - जर बरसता...
कुदरत की उन बूंदों का वो कहर!



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(PS - A new start .... my very first post here at poetic cries .... In a language that I almost never liked when I was in school... No not sanskrit, I Hated it... here I have mentioned the word "never like"....

But then again in life .... you never know when this "never" ends out of sudden.... :) Uncertainty & exploration in new avenues is what makes it worth living!

12 comments:

The Pink Orchid said...

ah baarish aur aashiqui - the most intoxicating combination ever..

you portrayed it well, Pulkit..

PULKIT said...

thanks for the appreciation kajal!
I am very cautious in the approach... may be baby steps... thats why wrote something small...I dont have confidence of expression here in this language
and thanks for the appreciation :)
meant a lot!

Preetilata【ツ】 said...

it was a deadly combination of rain and romance.

very beautifully expressed.

congratulations for this new start. :)

Sam said...

ultimate man. i love hindi poetry. not many of us can write. u got it dude.

fantacilicious (my creation).

added u up mate :)

PULKIT said...

@ preetilata - thanks deary! :)
smiles back to ya!

PULKIT said...

@ sam = hey bro! thanks a ton for the motivation...just as I said to kajal... same goes here again...
comment and appreciation on this initial phase meant a lot :)

yamini meduri said...

nice...beautiful..!!!

PULKIT said...

@ yamini - thanks for the comments sis!

paramveer said...

kk...can i write the word seksie here??..:)
so toxic lines......
hope to c more in the same lango!!

nilima said...

oh gosh! pullu bhaiya n hindi.. he he he.. i knw u ne'er liked hindi wen u wer in schul.. bt neways u've writtn vry nicely..!! mwah!

PULKIT said...

@ param - sure! more coming soon...

PULKIT said...

@ nimila - hugs to ya metu!
miss u loads