Thursday, April 15, 2010

Some small small things... 1


Inspired Fiction. Honest

She was to leave tomorrow, for a 7 day trip to Malaysia.
“I need to meet you once... before you leave jaan, Yaad se please... Mil ke jaana...” He said.
“pakka...my shoni moni... muaaaaaah! Kal, il meet u ...” she giggled, on the other end of phone.
“Love u, bye... catch u tomorrow!”

The next morning, at 11, he was at the mall. Waiting for her.
He looked at his watch, it was 1. She was not there...
He called her up.

“Where are you?”
“sorry jaan... I had to go shopping with a friend, she is getting married in two weeks from now...and humara program achanak se ban gaya , u know... and ....” she was giggling, innocently, seemingly sounding or pretending to sound cute...
before she could complete her sentence
there was dial tone at the other end, He had hung up. Left. In tears... again!

PS - If you fail to set your priorities in life, you can hurt someone close to you... a lot!

18 comments:

Chocolate Lover said...

awww..beautiful!
sorry I wasn't around :|

Zave said...

Small gestures do matter in life, whether it be in a relationship or some work.
The short write up brought it out well.
Cheers!

Amity said...

That's very, very true! But at times, we commit some lapses unintentionally!

Short read but great message!

Been absent here for a long time!

Hope to see you in my space, too! I am following you!

have a nice day!

An Ordinary Gal said...

so true..many times we hurt our loved ones unintentionally..

paramveer said...

very well written bro!!....we must decide the priorites of our life, otherwise everything gets tear apart leaving us in a state of amnesia and tears!!
regards!

myundiary said...

This is so true. I definitely get the message. We need to prioritize the relationships in our lives. We never know IF WE WILL see them again.

priyanka said...

indeed a great work........well written

The Aspirant said...

quite beutifully depicted yaar....
truly sumtyms its essential to set priorities coz u r unless at verge of losing much,dat u cnt bear...

PULKIT said...

@ chocolate lover - oyii :) ur not suppose to say sorry deary!
:)
thanks for coming back!
missed ya a lot!
u have ur own innate sweetness in ur presence!!

PULKIT said...

@ zave - thanks for the comments dear!
I appreciate ur kind words, they were encouraging!
pls keep visiting!

PULKIT said...

@ amity - thanks for the deep read and comments dear!
I visit ur page very often :)
M a follower there too!
somehow not able to comment for sometime...
but shall definately do so this time when il be around

PULKIT said...

@ an ordinary gal - :) thanks for visit and comment!
somehow I feel...that U wanted to share something more!

PULKIT said...

@ param - :) so true bro!

PULKIT said...

@ myundiary - ah! great to have u back :)
thanks for comments!
keep reading

PULKIT said...

@ priya - thanks sis!

PULKIT said...

@ aspirant - have u ever lost someone, this way bro?

PinkZz said...

i saw myself in dis..!
its been almost ten times whn he asked me 2 meet him and i refused..!
aww..how much i hurt him !:'(

CutePriya said...

This even happened to one of my close friend but this end led them to a realization that they're in LOVE...and it was a new Beginning...:)