Let there be rain.
A splash on my face
till it drenches the pain in me
The pain of the lost love
That left me
below and above
Dancing
in the besiege
of fears cornering me
into a darker shade
A cut from a blade
and blood flow on floor
drawing your face
Beautiful. Bitchy and something more.
Confusing assuming!
I cry.. and pray,
Let there be rain!
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PS - What is it that changed your mind? Who is it that keeps you blind?Why did you change so fast?
Did you really have to leave me behind?
I start to think about all we had.And how it turned this way...I guess I'll have to leave your side,
And turn my face away...
18 comments:
some where i can relate to the feelings but the situations are different :).
Perfectly written..!!!
Its been a long time that i dint read you...thanks for making my come back here so beautiful..thanks a ton dear..!!!
perfect pulkit..!!
aww... I can so relate to this one. Amen!
Thats painfully beautiful !
aaah that was so beautiful :)
what happened bro. ? everything alrite ?
@ harini - I shall pray that things get better for u dear, regarding whomsoever it may concern
@ yamini - thanks sis! ur praise meant a lot to me...just struggling with words, trying to write sense :)
@ raaji - kyun yaar? :( no! pls.. dont...
@ adreamygal - thanks for the read. I can see...u quite touched the soul of the write up :)
thanks!
keep reading
@ errant - thanks :)
@ pinkzz - not quite ok sis... :(
Il tell u soon... :(
:'(
Hey iv come back here after a long time ... you're getting better and better!
kuddos for ur good work!!
cheers!
very well written .........hey would be giving a call to u on sunday bahut sari baatein karni hain
@warm sunshine :) Thanks :)
U made my day!
@ priyanka - hey! :) pakka. I'll wait!
Oh, this is sad!
Who dared left you? Nope...i have no business knowing it, just wanna let u smile!
It's a beautiful poem Pulkit but on a sad note...the pain of leaving, I knew that before!
Have a nice day!
You have beautiful pen :)
Great work.
marinela x x
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