Sunday, October 11, 2009

Psycho - 1

DISCLAIMER - Life is strange and so is the society around us! It bores elements of every sort, this is my effort to peep into Psychological corners that I along with each of you neglect to focus on, as our understanding of the same is poor. People who have had a bad day can avoid making it furthur by reading this and people who have had a great day can escape this and continue being on the path of light...
The post ahead is the first one in the psycho trilogy and might hold your hand towards boundaries of darkess and leave you alone!




“Its so sweet, isn't it?”, Ridhima exclaimed looking deep into the mist of the cloudy sky.

“Seems a bit cynical to me!”, replied Sam!

Not your fault anyways... you are what? A dump of hatred!

so...you mean to say...???

yeah! Exactly, I mean the same, you see,,,

hmmm....

“Murdered seven already, what more you want?”, she was loud!

“I don't know... may be a lot lot more is yet to be done!” he said in a low voice,gazing on the sadness of the sky which only he could see.

Sameer, popularly known as Sam was studying forensic medical science in Australia, he was shot thrice in cold blood from a point blank range by a couple of Aussie Junkies on racial grounds but miraculously he was operated and he survived. In the same accident he lost his younger sister and parents. He came back to India the other day of his release from Hospital there, was now living with the girl who was his only support! Her Fiancée Ridhima was a psychiatrist in New Dehli and was observing his behavior from past 2 months. He seems to have developed a love of killing those whom he loved, It started with his flower pot collection, the went on to the burning of his childhood long stamp book, and gradually moved on to his pets. He poisoned his pair of white Mice, and strangulated his dogs, The last one was Ridhima's cat, whom he gifted to her on their first anniversary! She fell from the roof of their flat, Ridhima was sure that the cat was being thrown by none other then him.

The only question that she was to answer herself was that why on earth they were still together?

She was her doctor, the only one left to take care of him but so what? He was dangerous indeed and who else can know it better then her. It was high time when she stops putting cover on his strange activities and separate ways in life so that He can be consulted to medical care centers meant to accommodate such cases.

Today they are on the balcony. Discussing the known fact to both for the first time. She was kind and stupid at the same time to have saved Sam from this shame earlier.

“You were the One who killed my Kitty, the other day na?”, she asked firmly!

“No! How can you even think of this?” he grumbled back!

“I'm rather sure about it Sam, But hey... listen to the whole thing first...”

“Listen What Ridz? What? YOU TELL ME STRAIGHT if you want me to leave and please don't cook these fuckin plots...”

“arrey! What happened? Why on earth are you shouting?” Look! “I am trying to say...”

“That I am psycho na!....”

“Yeah! Thats what you want to say... hai na?” he carried on!

“No na! Suno pehle... just be calm! , I wish to say something first...” she said politely, keeping a hand on his cheeks!

He was sobbing hard! “Ridhima ... I am sorryyyyy yaar!”.

She was teary, time is so cruel, last 30 days for this boy were real tough, he is not actually in his senses!

She hugged her back and rubbed her hands on his shoulders! “hey... I love you a lot Sam! We can get you treated, its the first stage of this problem, Just a patch!”

“Pucca? Sure na??? More tears! He emraced her tight!

“Yes sure! I will just book the tickets, We are leaving for Bombay tomorrow, I know a center there for such cases and the Doc is a personal good friend of mine! Sidharth is practicing there... You remember? He was in the same school with us yaar, It won't be that tough to talk this out with him I am sure!

“Do whatever you want, but please save me! I am not what I was...” ,”save me”,SAVE ME!!

he held her even tighter! She kissed his forhead!


They sat on the balcony for almost an hour. He was sleeping in her arms, it was about to rain. She saw him, His bruised injuries seemed like a pain for her eyes. She muffed her hairs!

She stood up...went in and Dialed the travel agent.

“Yeah! Two tickets”

“yes.. ok ok!!”

“Thanks!”


She came out again. It was raining, she kissed his eyes. They were wet too!

He got half awake, “Hug me please...” he whispered!

They were into each others arms.

She froze!

Her T-shirt from the Navel was Red!

She was stabbed!

He cried again, this time louder.

He went in. redialed the number.


“yes! Make it one!”

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PS - This one is a dedication to My Friend Salil who prompted me to take up the theme of hatred and explore my writing jonoure! I purposely avoided the grey flavor to dvell more into the story cos my young readers ( so many of them who are teenagers) are always at the back of my mind and I never wanted them to be feeding cruelty from this page atleast! I will go into deeper shades of blood from the next posts in this trilogy so I am afraid that you readers have to bear with me of now! :) Hope you will enjoy reading these too!


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26 comments:

anushree said...

i cant really comment on this one...cruel yes it was...bloody hell!
tum milo mujhe this tym m gonna catch hold of ur ears...damn.
apart frm that GUD ATTEMPT.
god bless!

pinkZz said...

0h man..! the end was killing.! can u mail me this please bro ? i need 2 send dis 2 my sister.. u knw naa sahityika..
actually she is busy and not allowed to surf except checking mails.. so can u do dis favour to me please ??

Jaunty anima said...

my god..cold..cold killing....
but nicely written..*applauds*

Butterfly Thoughts said...

that was scary and cruel she loved him so much.Where do you get this ideas from.

The Aspirant said...

just tell me one thing wad is dis???? :O :O
i mean m shocked, m dumb, m completely numb.......i dunno to praise u fr dis awesum wrk or see d story or wad???

vl tell u xact things later.......but a tremendous wrk....

I, Me and Myself said...

woah i should have paid heed to d disclaimer pulkit...nywys that sunk deep....cold...

n i think its one f d most difficult genre to write...cuz one dsnt feel that much of animosity...

but u did it well..gud one..

I, Me and Myself said...

n i cant even say i am waiting fr more..cuz dis one gave me chills...i wonder what d next two will do...

Salil said...

pulkit yaar........loved this one awesome post dude...............outstanding..........waiting eagerly for 2nd part.......

thanks for attempting this boy..........

priyanka said...

cruel indeed yaar....... kahan se ideas le aate ho bhai........but well attempted as always.....

tristarfivestar said...

wooooooooow that was pretty gud!!!!

Ekam said...

That was really scary but I liked the concept. Couldn't imagine the end

PULKIT said...

@ anushree di - :) love ya! and yeah..my ears are always for ya to catch hold off :P but for that u got to catch me ..he he he!

Psycho series mein abhi bahut kuch aana baaki hai...wait and watch!!

PULKIT said...

@ pinkzz - I am so glad that u enjoyed the sudden and unexpected for most people sort ending... :) I had mailed this to sahityika on her gmail id :) I had that :)

PULKIT said...

@ jaunty - kind of u to have liked this work! welcome to my page...stick around if u like it . hope to see ya again!
keep visiting :)

PULKIT said...

@ butterfly thoughts - read the disclaimer of this post for the ans of ur question :)
it will let u know where my ideas come from :)

PULKIT said...

@ the aspirant - I will wait for ur comment then :)

PULKIT said...

@ I, me and myself - :) thanks for the appreciation! m a cynic too somewhere deep within me, I can go deep into this genre... but god knows...who will pull me out then :P

PULKIT said...

@ I , me and myself - the second one will be on AIR on 24th most probably

PULKIT said...

@ salil - thanks bro for appreciation :)
was out of town for few days. came back today! will write then next one soon

PULKIT said...

@ priya - its just the society and people around me that inspires and sometimes the fantasies forced upon dreams or rather nightmares

PULKIT said...

@ tristarfivestar - thanks for appreciation! keep visitn

PULKIT said...

@ ekam - he he he! see... even I can write suspense too some day :)

..pAnKHuRi.. said...

A very happy and a properous diwali to you and your family :)
cheers !!

Prabhjot said...

Hi! pulkit,
Hmm.. so this one of your post was bit different in every sense.. I'm really astonished by the theme which u choose this time.. But yeah, no point in saying that u plotted the whole story very well..

Tkcr.

PULKIT said...

@ pankhuri - thanks and same to ya deary :)

PULKIT said...

@ prabhjot - thanks brada :)
keep visiting!
loads more to come stil...