Friday, September 4, 2009

My Comeback and Some love story Like forever

On a warm summer night
I lost my path
intentionally

On a rainy dusk
I am searching a new one
to retrace and rejuvenate


It took time
It took traces
But it was all worth it!


Dearest readers of my blog, this is an announcement that I am back to regular posting here @ PCIP!
As well as actively back on virtual world of social networking and associations. I will start commenting on the blogs that I was following from today onwards! :) and will keep following the new ones that would impress my senses... Now 2 basic answers for all those who are interested in them.

Where was I ? letting off a though patch from some personal debris, as well as Shifting home actually, Why? because My family have left the city due to the nature of my father's transferable service and I will be living alone in my new accommodation for next two years to complete my electronics engineering studies. Finally I have managed to have a net connection at this new flat and so am I back from the very next day!

I would sincerely like to thank dear friends like Priyanka Nagpal and Neha Dhamija for constantly being my source of smile by letting me know time and again that they miss me here on my arena.
So many others commented and became a follower while In this meanwhile, and for all of them I would like to quote the following song lyrics...

“beech raah mein Dilbar
Bichad jaayein kahin hum agar
Aur suni si lagey tumhe
Jeevan ki ye Dagar
Hum Laut ayengey !!
Tum yun hi bulate rehna....

KABHI ALVIDA NA KEHNA
KABHI ALVIDA NA KEHNA!!”

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She was reading her bed time novel when Nupur's phone started vibrating. Avinash was calling. It was 12.35 in the night! “Hi avi! Kya hua? Itni raat ko... ??? neeni nahi aa rahi kya?”,she said giggling.

“look Nupz, majaak mat udaao yaar... tumhe pata hai na kitni tension hai... !!” he replied in a firm straight voice, expecting sympathy and concern from her, which she hardly got ever.

“oh god Mr Romeo, did you proposed her or not? I made you learn the lines na! Just call her up and be a man, show some god damn courage you Idiot”, she was still giggling.

“had it been you, it would have been so so easy, gosh! Just as Neha picks up the phone, I forget everything... even my name.” he was sounding low!

“look Avi, I think since last 2 years, you have eaten my god damn head over this girl, I think you should go for it tonight, she is your good friend now too and keep telling me how much she adores and respects you all the time... just tell her what you feel for her.” she replied with the same calmness and compassion with which Nupur had been dealing with Avinash for past 8 years.

“aur waise bhi... har ladki ka sapna hoga ki tum jaisa ladka usey miley...” she said in a low tone and took a breath.

Avi kept the phone down. She smiled again and resumed her novel, muttering to herself... “pagal hai ye ladka.”

Avi and Nupz were best friends since school days, then college and now professional buddies, have faced so many ups and downs but were always there for each other.

Tee tee – tee tee, her phone started beeping again, she read a text message which was from Avi.

“I just proposed her, she said Yes :) wanted me to marry her soon. I am shocked, numb, thrilled and everything else that I can't express in words”. She called him up. “mubarak ho mr romeo, koi ladki bechari bewkoof ban hi gayi finally”, she said and started giggling again. “Nupz, tum kabhi toh serious hua karo yaar”, he said smiling. He was happy. She was happy because he was happy. “acha ab phone rakho, mujhe mere best friend se baat karni hai”,she said.

“haan haan jao, kal milte hain, tumhe pata hai waise... You are the best, I repeated exactly same lines to her what you told me to, I still dont know How you understand my emotions, more then I understand them, You are the best thing that ever happened to me, ab chane k jhaad pe mat chado...ahem ahem! Jyada ho gaya”, he said this and with voice of laughs, his tone faded away to single beep on phone line.

She opened her room and went out in the garden, she looked up! Moon stared from above. Seemed as if tears were shedding from cheeks of moon and moon light is carrying them and settling them on her eyelids. Her eyelids were wet. Her eyes were red. She cried. “only you knew that I loved him beyond all limits for all these years, I wish I would have agreed to your advice of letting him know about it”,”I wish... I wish...”

she came back running. Stormed into her pillow and busted to tears. She picked up a piece of paper and wrote on it the following lines from a text message which she had learn...

“Zindagi se humne kuch chaha hi nahi
chaha jise bhi usse kabhi paya hi nahi
jise paya usse kuch yun kho diya
jaise Zindagi mein kabhi koi aaya hi nahi”


she opened the window of her room and threw that paper up in the sky, peeping her one hand out. The air blows of chill, carried them up above, some where towards her best friend, the moon. Few minutes later, it rained, it rained as if the moon was crying, it rained as if its every droplet covered the beauty of her selfless true love. She looked up to the moon and allowed the raindrops to splash on her forehead. She smiled.





30 comments:

PULKIT said...

dear readers,

:) all smiles at my end!
do give me updates about you all... I missed u all a lot :)
tc god bless!
regards!
with ocean of love and universe of blessings
PULKIT

Sarah Rahman said...

Welcome back! :)

Looking forward to read more from you.

Take care and stay blessed.

Princess Caspian said...

simple yet so touching...well usually simple things are the ones that are beautiful...
ahamzingly written!!
but i have a question...why always a sad ending!!? try writing a happy one..I'd love to see one coming from you.Hope I get to see it...

Shravan | ശ്രവണ്‍ said...

welcome back saheb.. and as always, nicely and neatly penned :) and saheb, how come u use the same words i say to my bestie in your story? you are the best thing to happen in my life? :P

Dhanya said...

Welcome backkkkk! :) Missed ya in the virtual world...

The story was wonderful and sad (yet again). But she smiled at the end na? So the sadness gets reduced a lil....

PULKIT said...

@ sarah - thanks a lot deary !! :)

PULKIT said...

@ princess caspian - next one will be a happy one !!! :) :) pakka!!

PULKIT said...

@ shravan - some expressions are same!
just with different names!
:)

thanks for the read and comments :) meant a lot!!

PULKIT said...

@ dhanya - heyyyyyyyyyyyyy!!
missed u tooooooooooooooooooo dhanya!
:) tc god bless!
seeing ur name in my comments made me smile :)

Ekam said...

I'll again say the same that I said on the other blog. Its beautiful:)

Ekam said...

And yes.. Welcome back:)

(¯`•._.•[Raaji]•._.•´¯) said...

nice story.
I cannot get my head around why people dont tell that they love and then complain about it later.
:-S

Ekam said...

Hope to see you with more stories:)

Brosreview said...

Welcome back!

An Ordinary Gal said...

nice post, loved it :)

ANWESA said...

welcome back!!!!

the story was a bit old-fashioned...i actually skipped many lines...

Satyu said...

Aaahh... Very beautiful writeup yaar :)
seriously very touching :)

Takecare
Keep smiling :)

PULKIT said...

@ ekam - :)

PULKIT said...

@ ekam - m so happy to be back!! :)

PULKIT said...

@ raaji - :D yeah! thats true!!

PULKIT said...

@ ekam - I promise u plenty more stories in days to come :)

PULKIT said...

@ brosreview - thanks ajey :)

PULKIT said...

@ ordinary gal - :) thanks deary!!

PULKIT said...

@ anwesa - thanks for the read and comments, will try to come up with something fresh next time :)

PULKIT said...

@ satyu - thanks a lot for the appreciation dear :)

The Aspirant said...

welcum back bhai.......
miss ur writeups so much.....seriously coz i ma used to ur stories nw, even dey motivates to write different things.......

this post is awesum as usual, ur sense of imagery is gr8888

cheer :)

Prabhjot said...

Too good to see you back, presenting fabulously all your emotions...

Really why does this happens?? If x person is in love with y person, how can he/she can remain silent, just to bring some more smiles on his/her loved one face?? He/she should must think for a while, may be the one to whom he/she love, may be much more-more happier to know this..

PULKIT said...

@ the aspirant - thanks a lot bro!!

PULKIT said...

@ prabhjot - very writely said !! :)

Arun Kumar said...

he he.. This must be the belatedest welcome msg..

anyways, "Welcome back Pulkit"

Me too took a break from blogging for a month... n so the late reply....
n now starting fresh n rejuvenated...

n awesome entry into the contest man !!!