I realize how much I had always loved you...
I realize how Much I still love you....
I realize how Much I will Always love you...
I cry I weep in the silence of my tears,
Cos U will never understand anything!
I stare out from that window...
To amuse the beauty of nature,
I weep to see how much I am lost...
Deep within the truths of my own stature!
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Raat ki shama hai tere sazde mein saji,
asfaano k hain alfaaz magar gum se kahin!
khoyi si is manzil ka meri...
Ek humsafar bas tu hi to tha shayad !!
jin deewaron k sahare tiktey they hum kabhi,
aaj unko bhi aapne gira diya hai !
us phool ki mehak toh gum pehle si hi thi,
fir usko masalne se aapko kya mil gaya?
Us khidki k nazaare...
hua karte they kabhi haseen.
woh baarish ki boondein...
woh mast hawaon ki lehar...
Aaj uske kaanch bikhre hain !!
zameen par yahin kahin tut kar !!
woh na khulti hai aur na band hoti hai...
betuki si bas ek saza sehti hai :(
Us se aati hai garmi ki loo,
dhoop ki jalaane waali tapish,,
Itni garam ki ek jala hua dil...
phir bhun jaata hai us aag mein !!
Jin baaton se sukoon ki
do chaar saansein milti thi
ab toh unka bhi ...
namunishaa nahi hai !
mausam they woh kya madhoshi ke,
bina dastak diye phir kahan se aayi,
Is pathjhad si ye batameez aandhi !!
mere mann ko kuch aur jhik jhodta ye nazara...
gire huye patte aur ukhdi si dhool !!
bikhra sa paani aur sehmey se dare phool !!
Unki masoomiyat hai khafa si aaj ,
Phir cheekh rahi unki khoyi talaash !!
Phir choda hai kismat ne unka bhi saath!!
Phir suna sa hai mera jahaan...
Phir nafrat si hoti hai jeene mein...
Phir badnaseeb se hain hum...
Ki koi dard ka aalum na jaan paya seene mein !!
fiza se gum si ho gayi hai,
woh natkhat si shaitaani.
par kuch khoya toh nahi hai khaas,
apni tizoriyon mein se !!
Phir kyun aisa lagta hai...
Ki shayad mujh mein se hi,
mera sab kuch ...
Koi chura k le gaya!
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Hey dear - I still love you
may be we can work on it
PLEASE DONT GO!!
P.S. - Look I know its kind of still not very bright post... But U dont come out of darkness all at ones. right? !No!! okays , then you may be different, But I am different too in my own senses... I remain in similar thought about 20 days a month! good for my health and life or not I dont know and I dont wanna know too! This one is litrary so judge by the feeling, and plus its not conclusive! Its just another poetry after a couple of prose By me! I hate this question... How is life? My life revolves around a lot many things and even though I have great days in all, I somehow finds reasons to moan at nights and somehow those reasons come from a person with whom I desire to spend the happiest moments!! anyways! leave all that and criticize my hindi works, I know I am rather bad at them! Ur opinions of all sorts are welcome :)
P.P.S. - "Humein tumse pyaar Kitna, Ye hum nahi jaante... Magar jee nahi sakte Tumhare bina! Suna Gum judai ka, uthate hain log, jaane zindagi kaise... bitate hain log, Din bhi yahan toh lagey... baras ke samaan ; Humein Intezaar kitna, ye hum nahi jaante.... MAGAR JEE NAHI SAKTE TUMHARE BINA!!"
BY THE WAY, I SANG THE SONG IN P.P.S. IN MY INTRO AT COLLEGE AND YEAH IF U GET TIME ... READ MY SECOND GUEST POST here
P.P.S. - "Humein tumse pyaar Kitna, Ye hum nahi jaante... Magar jee nahi sakte Tumhare bina! Suna Gum judai ka, uthate hain log, jaane zindagi kaise... bitate hain log, Din bhi yahan toh lagey... baras ke samaan ; Humein Intezaar kitna, ye hum nahi jaante.... MAGAR JEE NAHI SAKTE TUMHARE BINA!!"
BY THE WAY, I SANG THE SONG IN P.P.S. IN MY INTRO AT COLLEGE AND YEAH IF U GET TIME ... READ MY SECOND GUEST POST here
27 comments:
thanks for the awesome feedback on the last post!
I missed ekam's, dreamer's and pritanka's comment though :(
:) MISS U ALL!!
waiting for comments on this one... then!
with ocean of love and universe of blessings
PULKIT
P.S. - I WILL WAIT FOR UR COMMENT TOO!! samjhi! pls read it and comment
Nice lines! At first, I was taken back by you using "U" instead of the correct word "you". But, then, I got the point. Good luck!
Long P.S. So I will not speak about you and just give an honest feedback about your poem.
You did well, other than some minor points which can be corrected here and there :)
Now you're being apologetic for writing the things you want to! Don't ever do that! This is your blog yaar :) Write everything you feel like writing....
:)
Hey Pulkit... tried to follow your blog but it says please try again later :P Well I liked this post! =D
@ brosreview - thanks sir :)
@ ash - thanks a lot dear! Will try to improve the next time !! :)
I loved the last post on ur blog..wrote a blog post instead of a comment :P
still thinkin abt that
@ dhanya - I was not apologetic for what I wrote...I was actually being apologetic for the sadness that It created in the life of few people around me!
Got a couple of mails of people getting real depressed by the end of the last post!
Was sad to pass that negativity from my end to their...thats all dear!
:)
U dint mentioned how u liked this post?
@ rosh - arrey its not problem of my blog only yaar...I got the same msg when I tried to follow back my recent follower...I guess some work going out @ blogspot or something may be!
:) try it later honey, I am sure u will get through next time!
tc god bless deary
Hi Pulkit
Another nice post...beautiful words and the feeling behind the same was also very true.
Kahin kahin par i feel u missed the rhythm.
But overall a very good attempt.
btw plz write hindi poetry using hindi fonts or it kills the beauty of the poem.
Regards
Neha
hey it is simply fantastic ........loved it bhai as always....yes my frnds even lovedit n they wana congratulate u anyways take care love loads
Simply beautiful..the simplicity of words and expressions and the freshness of thought..simply outstanding!
Just dropping by your blog.
@ neha - I will try to remove the errors next time :)
I got mails of people asking me to write hindi poetry in eng fonts as they said...mobile culture have made this more easy to understand rather then hindi :P
@ priyanka - hey sis! muah! thanks a lot
!!
@ shanu - m so glad that u liked it so much dear :)
keep visiting!
hope to see u here again
@ ste - thanks for the visit
Hey Pulkit,
Nice post ...and the words are chosen properly ...meaning behind them is touching..!
Outstanding poem as always,,
@ Vyshu - thanks a lot :)
keep visiting, have a great day!!
u write romantically.
really good.
@ pinkzz - thanks a lot sweety! Ur a little angel with a beautiful heart to feel what others write :)
god bless u
the pain flowing out...and the words are so aptly chosen...
brought back lots f memories!
very touching!
@ Megha - thanks for the visit and comment back dear :)
well written and heart felt.....sorrow poems I think is the most difficult to write about and most memorable ones...
Keep writing!!
well written and heart felt.....sorrow poems I think is the most difficult to write about and most memorable ones...
Keep writing!!
@ dreamer - thanks dear for the comments :)
Maza aageya padh ke:)
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