Friday, June 12, 2009

अल्फाज़ -4(scribbles of the heart -3 = I am incomplete without you)

(You complete My Thoughts)
(tere bina mere alwaaz adhoore hain)


sawaalon k is bhawandar ko ab kaise jhelun
ek jawaab dena hota toh main sochta bhi...
sailaab sa utha tha armaano ka dil mein
ek lehar ko rokna hota toh main sochta bhi...

dil se nikalte har ehsaas ki kasam
bas dhudha tujhe jahan gaye kadam
na waqt ka taqaaza, na zamane ki fikar
bas tere hi didaar ko har lamha tarsi nazar!

kya jism ki hai tapish aur
kya bandishon ka kehar
kya rooh ki majboori aur
kya saanson ki lehar

aaj dastaan hai hazaar sunane ko
par khamoshiyon ka hi aalam hawaon mein hai
Unchahe khwaab hain laakhon baatne ko
par zhakhmo ka hi aalam dawaon mein hai

is shab ki sazish se ajnabi nahi hai ye andhera
par iski bandishon k upar haavi hai meri rooh ka sawera
alwaazon mein kho k unhe bhoolna hi swabhaav hai mera
meri adhoori kavitaon ko poora karna hi bas kaam hai tera!

Aaj gungunane ko hain nagme hazaar
ek saaz bhi saath hota toh main sochta bhi
adhoori baat ko khatam karna akele mumkin nahi
ek aapka saath hota toh main sochta bhi....

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I was sitting idle when I thought of you
I was doing work when I thought of you
I was driving when I thought of you
I was crying when I thought of you
I was afraid when I thought of you
I was smiling when I thought of you

I was Incomplete when I thought of you
Your thought made me complete!
Without your thoughts, my words never make sense!

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(Ps - tu jo nahi hai toh kuch bhi nahi hai... ye mana ki mehfil jawaan hai hanseen hai )
Transfer season is here...shifting home soon! I am a person who moves on really slowly! sadness is dwelling fast upon me... I wish you were here to complete my thoughts in a full circle! Miss you more then words! I need you!

18 comments:

PULKIT said...

five stars and two thumps up episode 3... coming up!
:)
next!

keep visiting@
keep commenting@

fms1988 said...

This was an outstanding piece of work..IM TOTALLY IN LOVE with it.
Standin ovation from my side.

& surprisingly iv been hummin the song "Tu jo nahi hai.." since this morning !!!!

Loved it i swear.!
wish i could write like this :)

priyanka said...

hey pulkit its absolutely fantasticloved it.....

sayrem said...

would you mind terribly,if I steal this piece for a card? :)

Brosreview said...

Ah! Strong and heartfelt, this one. Keep writing!

Anonymous said...

hey pulkit!
nice expression of love!
keep writing!
regards...
riya.

PULKIT said...

@ fms - hey dear! m so so thankful to u for such a boosting motivation and appreciation of work!
:)

THANKS A TON!
KEEP VISITING!

PULKIT said...

@ priya - hey sis! :) thanks!

PULKIT said...

@ sayrem - I am glad that u considered it good enough to be written for someone!
:)
keep visitng!

PULKIT said...

@ brosreview - thanks ajey! keep visitng!

PULKIT said...

@ riya - thanks for the comments and visit dear!!

I, Me and Myself said...

aawwww pulkit u left me spellbound...awsome...gr8 piece of work.....every expression was so beautiful...

Pretty Me!! said...

"tu jo nahi' .. so so beautiful song !!

and so was ds poem re ... really wonderful .. mere ko bhi hindi me likhna hai ;)

PULKIT said...

@ I,me and myself - glad to have u here at my blog dear! m happy that u were impressed by my work!
hope to see ya around more :)

PULKIT said...

@ pretty me - :) then go for it and explore the so called "shabdon ki duniya"
:)
lets play irresistible in hindi ...whats say :P

ultimatechange said...

Wah! wah! kya baat hai. :)

Preetilata【ツ】 said...

gr8 pulkit. u hindi poems too are amazing. :)

nilima said...

oh gosh! u've written so so beautifully.. really it was sumthng juz awesum.. so romantic.. so lovable.. n many more..i don't hav words.. keep writin.. it was really appreciable.. love u!

ur metu!