It dials the number of a familiar and calming voice ...
And gratefully, my lifeline to sanity ... remains intact. “
TRING TRING! TRING TRING!
Him – hello??? (a low manner)
Her – hi! How r u now? (enthusiastically)
Him – kyun? mujhe kya hua hai? (sarcasm)
Her – seemed as if u were very upset when u hung up the call, a couple of days back. (formal tone)
Him – and it took u 48 hours to realize that I deserved a call back. (In a harsh anger!)
Her – no! Its not like that... (defending politeness)
Him – I know what its like! (acquisition!! )
Her – I dint knew what pissed u off? Did I said something wrong?
Him – for you life is fun and so is me!
Her – what made you think that? Its utter rubbish! (retorting back tone!)
Him – first you laugh stupidly on me, then we will talk later! K! (resisting anger tone!)
Her – I never laugh on you...(defending!)
Him – then what was it that you laughed on that day
Her – which day?
Him – two days back when I called u up!
Her – oh! I was not laughing on u! (straight away tone!)
Him – life is just fun for you! Just fun!
Her – kya hai???????? (stretching the “hai!!!!!!!!”)
Him – kuch nahi! Leave it!
Her – at least tell me how are you feeling now?
Him – I am fine! Thanks a lot for the concern eh! (sarcastically!)
Her – I am always concerned about you.... hope you understand this some day!
(she hung up the call.... voice of dial tone ... too too too)
TRING TRING! TRING TRING! He tries to call back!
CALL DISCONNECTED! ( “Voice message from subscriber – The number you have called is busy, please call after.... “)
TRING TRING! He calls again....
Her – ab kya hai? ( politely!)
Him – phone kyun kaata?
Her – kab?
Him – abhi!
Her – (silence!)
Him – (silence !! )
for next 8 seconds the silence remains!
Then....
Him – sorry yaar! I was a little over rude!
Her – huh...
Him – i am saying sorry na! (cutely! )
Her – its ok!
Him – ur my only friend here! And I dint expected u to laugh that day...
Her – which day?
Him – huh!!!
Her – oh! I never laugh firstly! And secondly! If u wont tell me that you are sad! How will I know myself? (politely! )
Him – all things are not told! ! !
Her – but somethings are!!!
Him – i am fine now!
Her – yeah! You sound better then that day!
Him – which day?
Her – (smiles!) tc! I got to go now!
Him – (smiles back! ) you too take care!
Him – bye! Miss u!
dial tone ... too too too... fades away) (TO BE CONTINUED...)
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continuing series with this post! something that I had been planning to do from long long time.....
(PS- this is a work of fiction and neither inspired from mine or anyone else's personal life.... ahem ahem! do U belive that? )
24 comments:
ye!!!!
m da 1st one....
well.... aisa laga k dis is my talks written in d post....
lovely....
@ pinks - thanks for the comments dear!
:)
now that is what we call a viral post :P
u hv started of well bud but I think in this post itself the ending was a little filmy!! :P
but as i said...this could well turn out to be viral :)
btw ye Post a Comment ki just neeche ads :P
nice one ...lolz
u surely gonna get some clicks now
it is going on good! :)
@ salman sir - thanks :) hoping to work out the flawas soon... everything is so new for me... I am experimenting with my write ups As u can see that sir :)
@ salman sir - adds toh bahut pehle se hi wahin hain... :) its been ages but no increment in clicks :P no body comes here to pay me :D
from the day I have left working with u... no income :P
@ kajal - hope it does...
hey bhai..nic..bht acha laga..rlly continue it.itz goin gud..lovd it as alwyz..keep writing..
good iff u r goin 2 continue it 4-5 per wk!!
hi bhai its really interesting and mark my words every body will love it too......dont worry ok ........will be waiting for the next post..
Nice pace... Waiting for the next one!
hey bro...nice one yaar...!!!
waiting...!!!
@ paramveer - woh dono itni baat nai karte phone pe :P ki 4-5 times a week likh sakun ! :)
and change is law of nature... though I plan to make LL-CP a 100 episode series :P
then too... it will come in breaks... as next post is from the label "motivational solique" to help those who are down mentally...my same effort as always :)
@ priyanka - hugs to ya sis! thanksss a ton for the motivation! means a lot to me :)
@ satan's darling - thanks for the visit dear! keep visiting!
:)
god bless
@ yamini meduri - heya sis! M glad u liked this...well ur wait will have to exceed a bit as the net one to this might come somewhere between 12-16 may :(
have other posts lined up!! :D though!
you are most welcome....
hey came here blog hoppin.read ur previous post..interestin..do continue :)
@ misanthropist - thanks for the visit!
:)
keep coming back dear!
regards!
hey nice series of ur post!
lukng frewrd to the next one..
keep up da good work!
regards..
riya.
@ riya - hey dear! thanks for the visit and comments!
M just a bit busy these days! will visit ur blog soon :) okies!
I'm looking forward for the next series of this phone call.
:)
Great!
waiting for more !!
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