On little lanes of little town
somewhere in my memories
my soul still rests...
Energetic and dramatic!
When drenching in rain
cycling through wet mud,
those splash of water...
Dirty and delightful!
That six I missed
those goals I scored
memories of evenings..
Blissful and playful!
Bunch of buds hanging
a sun that never set
the fun that never ended..
talking and planning!
That beautiful face
her caring gestures
her support and trust..
innocent and innocuous!
Those hallucinating nights
when dreams use to come
my ambitions of visions..
broken and betrayed!
The little stupid fights
that used to seem so big
only memories remain..
faces and phases!
-(13,April,09)
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This poem is dedicated to My memories... days gone by... (2005)
The time when I was in the beautiful town of sahranpur! Those were the days... I miss it all!
Its been years, still somewhere my soul is still there, searching in The current days for its lost essence, for My little sis Nilima, for My dear friends of colony! Kartikey,Rohit and many other.. this one is for all of them... who made me what I am!
29 comments:
I could connect to this on so many levels Pulkit. The last line from each verse summarises an entire childhood, doesn't it?
When I visit the middle-east, I too walk across those paths, walk around those buildings and parks and benches where we would play, chit-chat and enjoy as we were free from the morally polluted world. Ignorance is bliss, eh?
Definitely, those moments make one who they are.
A good dedication to all your friends. Keep writing!!!
heyy pulkit............u made me remember those bestest days of my life!!!!!! i am really feeling sad now missin those days.......thanks for those memories bro......
as far as the poem is concerned, i think you should have worked harder on its ending caus the whole poem carries the reader in a dream but the ending is quite stubborn types!!! i hope u r gettin what i wish to say.......bt i loved this.
@ kartikey - it had a poor ending... as I had left it for a continuty!
wait for some time...
there is a continoues post....
with the title "somewhere in my memories - 2"
:)
the story is this on....
:)
read it again and ul get what I am conveying bro!
thanks for comments
@ brosreview - thanks for getting the scheme of words... I am always worried about this whenever I try to skip the regular abcb scheme!
but M glad that U enjoyed the change of style :)
hey bhaiya..a vry sweet post ths time..rlly it shws hw mch u miss ur old dayz..i l pry 2 god 2 gv u those dayz bck...
n agn gr8 job...keep writin..lovd it..!!
'Those' days are always the best days of our lives. I have also lived 16 years of my life in Patiala before moving here in Mohali. And same thing as Brosrview said those were the days where everybody was so close, so much loving. Not polluted , not populated. But as we say "life goes on" and one day we'll consider these present days as our 'those days' :)
God bless you :)
hi bro how are you? very well written as always simply fantastic this time everyone could relate to it, u always say na ki how come i find myself associated with each and evey post of urs ,this time not only me but rather every one reading it might associate with it........
hey Pulkit.....nice beginning dearie.... like everyone else I too got lost in the memories of Those amazing days of childhood......but tell u what....I dont yearn for those days soooooo much....coz I still have that small child in me alive and active :P
try doing all those same so called messy and childish things again....(though when ur alone, or else ppl will take u to mental hospital :D)....you'd love it :)
@ shagun - thanks a lot sis! for visit and comment again! ur support means a lot to me :)
@ ekam - very very right said ekam! we all emotional beings are in a habit of living in past!
@ priyanka - u might not belive it, but I am a bigger fan of urs then what u claim to be of mine! ur support means the world to me sis! thanks for all the kind words
@ khushi - heyyyyyyyyy!
glad to have u here again sis!
thanks for advice khushi! il try to take each and every workd of urs seriosuly,
I need change
I need break...
and may be I need help too!
:(
thanks all for support!
i hate this type of poems now which make my heart weep ...:(.....
@ param - tight hug!
A very well carved out poem.Memories are the most beautiful things to cherish when you are alone and in times of depression.
Saurabh
@ saurabh bhaiya - thanks for visit and comments again!
navigating on ur blog is very awesome. i would recommend u 2 pay attention 2 this.
@ sachin - thanks for visit and comments!
dint understood what u mentioned though???
thanku bhaiya for givin me a place in ur beautiful poem...thanx a million.. n i too badly miss those days of mah lif... (d bst part of mah past).. whenevr i get back into mah past n thnk abt dese wndrfl dayz n these memories, dey alwas leaves a smile wt tears on mah face...
want to say smthng abt ur poem also.. i mst mention its a gr8* piece of wrk.. n i love it.. it says abt mah past also.. which is truly unforgettable for both of us..it taks abt d time spent 2gether by both of us(d mst precious moments for us n for which i can evn die to live dat part again) ...n sorry for gettin late to come hre n to comment on ur new blog post.. seriousaly sorry .. bt i didn't get time.. :-(
This was so very beautiful....made me nostagic....u pictured every moment of da memory with panache! luvd it! :)
wow pulkit...you made me travel back in time...*pat on the back*
I loved the lines:
When drenching in rain
cycling through wet mud,
those splash of water...
Dirty and delightful
too good dude!!
@ nilima - ur my world... love u more then anyone else in this whole world bacha!
my lil lil baby!
@ maverick - honoured to have u here!
:)
thanks for visit and comments!
@ sandeep balan - hope to see u here again dear!
thanks for the visit! the signs of members from louge coming here means a lot to me:)
Hello hello :)
This is my first read on your blog, and I am feeling nostalgic already! A pleasant trip back in time... Lovely read! Waiting for the second part!
very nice !! loved this :)
nice..work..bhiyaa..loved itt!
awesome!
lovely poem......enjoyed it!!
Memories....some flashes in the gallery of our mind are always pleasant to revisit!!
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