When hope leaves your passage
its so hard to keep trying...
merging into shadows of agony
I end up each night crying!
Destituteness of my self beliefs
shattering within my crawl
lies, betrayals, disappoints
is what I tend to get from all.
Of hate and anger if one has to choose
what would be your choice?
Stopping to move ahead with fear
I stand still to make this noise!
For what bad done to whom
do I get so much to suffer?
for what sin committed my lord?
my prayers are always in buffer!
As each night I lay to bed
I always find a reason to moan
to smile is what I feel like doing
then why do I have to groan?
Save me from myself almighty
before I kill the dead soul of mine
these dried tears have had enough
now in my grave let me shine
---
(2 April,2009)
32 comments:
dearest readers of blog,
was working on a post on the life of a pakistani singer "Nazia hassan", but in the meanwhile certain personal setbacks that I had in last 4 days cursed me off to pen this down! it all happened by itself, I had been sharing all poetries in quite some while now but I would reinstate it that "I am not a poet... I just pen down my thoughts in 10 minutes and share it with you... penning these down helps me to feel a bit light and relaxed"
This post is dedicated to everyone around me who is close and has faced and intense harsh behaviour that I come up with when I am upset.. its a sorry to all of them!
and I humbly request the almighty to get me out of this sludge!
with ocean of love, universe of blessings
PULKIT
last night i was thinking a situation where i were passin thro some narrow street and on both side of that there were graves and ppl were hanging on trees.....scary thhoughts!!!!........and now AFTER READING THE LAST LINE OF THIS POEM......u hv given me new fantasy......LET ME SHINE IN MY GRAVE"....loved the poem as always...
PARAM
bveer.blogspot.com
heyy bhai xclent post again ..really jzz in few seconds it became really clz to ma heart post is also well supported by d pic..it has dat elixirical touch to whom any one can find a connect ..but i do feel its a psychedelic work is it?? you tell me
love u more than any 1 else.
-faraz.
hi bro excellent work ,fantabulous,really touched my heart sometimes i dont know why i connect myself with each n every post of urs and hey hi Faraz sorry to say you are wrong even i love pulkit more than anyone else sorry u are not the only one ..........
hey bhaiya m rlly spchls..agn a brillnt job...u rlly giftd by gr8 talnt..gud goin bhai..agn an amzng post...lovd it agn...kp it up!!!!:)
hi pulkit, read your poetry and really was moved by it. the lines have really been penned down beautifully and deeply touched by the words
"
Of hate and anger if one has to choose
what would be your choice?
Stopping to move ahead with fear
I stand still to make this noise!
For what bad done to whom
do I get so much to suffer?
for what sin committed my lord?
my prayers are always in buffer!
"
Really you told that i would like the poem, thanks for such a wonderful poem. do write more so i could comment more on them and make your blog a success, i know it already is, but it can become even bigger success.
dear friend , these lines aren't just a collection of words rather these are a composition of not only yours but every one like us who feel the same ...
a perfect blend of thoughts in a poetic form .....
really a hearty composition bro...
wish you success in all your initiatives .......
hmmmmmm..........hey pulkit,this one is a "classic piece of literature"...no doubt in that.....but i think you should start diversifying your poem-writing style now.........why do you always write sad,emotional nd depressed kind of poems......try some poems based on nature or some funny ones......you have the right brains and sense to do that.....so why stick to one genre???
please don't take it as an argument...its just a suggestion from my side!!!!!!!!
This is quite heartfelt, quite sentimental. The self-reflection, which you even admitted to, makes this poem quite special and personal.
When the mind is disturbed, you are confused what to say, what to think, how to feel, etc. That very confusion of thoughts is expressed very well here, frankly. Keep at it!!!
Glad to know that you feel better when you write and share your thoughts. The added bonus is you indirectly encourage others who are on the same path to do so too. I am impressed!!!
Keep writing!!! Keep inspiring!!!
A great piece of work for those pessimists who have no hopes left from life.Will serve as a motivating factor to tell them that life is much more than what they see an interpret.
Saurabh
@ paramveer - its such a heart felt satisfaction when someone like u trap the essence of the work! thanks bro! keep visiting!
@ faraaz sir - thanks for the comments sir! kind of worked hard to find a suitable pic for the post too! glad that u noticed it!
@ priyanka - thanks a lot sis for the appreciation! its so cute to see u fighting with faraaz bhaijaan as to who loves me more.. he he he! love U BOTH!
@ shagun - thanks a lot sweet little sis! for the comments and appreciaiton as always! it always leaves a big smile on my face!
@ parikshit - thanks for coming back !! glad to have ur comments again! :) m happy u liked the rhyme scheme this time!
@ rohit - thanks for the visit after long time! so happy to have u back in my comment box! thanks for the appreciation!
@ kartikey - yeah! so true man! I totally agree with you bro! me too thinking to start writing something funny... its been quite a while when m trapped in sad poetic jonoure! i say "trapped" as poetry of mine is not thought based rather its circumstantial! its always based on what I feel.. waiting for a bright day to write something motivational again or as u asked.. a funny humourous one too may be!
@ brosreview - thanks for the visit again and such an elaborated comment! gr8 motivation coming from your way to my heart again!
@ saurabh bhaiya - thanks for visit and comments!
hey pulkit...its lyk d shortest article of ur blog i guess bt d one which has motivated me d most...
i do really love dis one as usual...
n d ans to d que of choosing hate or anger??????? i tried thinking hard, bt yet dnt get any ans...
well its bit tough...
neways keep writing all such articles n yeah...ur blog ROCKS!!!
@ neha! - THANKS yaar! loved it when u said "my blog rocks... " its a big big kick! thanks for the motivation!
marvellous and enlightning..
You have outdone yourself in this poem! It was so poignant.
"Of hate and anger if one has to choose what would be your choice? "
If I may say so I strongly urge you to choose love:)
I am very fond of Nazia Hassan's songs. My dad had this cassette of "Disco Deewane" and I had heard her songs from a very young age.
Waiting for that post on her.....
@ divya mam - thanks for the visit mam! keep coming!
@ choco - glad to see u becoming a regular here... feels elated to have indepth comments from ur end! do keep visitng again!
will come up with post on her soon!!
Please don't take it the other way round Pulkit but please start writing something positive . And some articles may be. Poems are welcome too but may be an article once in a time. I am a fan of your articles. I hope you don't mind this comment.
Oh Kartikey has already written this...I just checked it. Hehe
@ ekam - just had a very rough day.. a sad one .. last week.. so wrote it that night.. just happened acidentally sis!
:(
anyways... coming up with a fresh post on pak singer nazia hassan sooooooon...
working very hard for it!
tc! thanks.. keep visiting..
looking forward for that article bro....though I too wud say that I need to see something positive from you....hope my wait wont be that long :) take care
God Bless
@ khushi - thanks a lot for the visit!
sorry yaar... going through a very tough phase in personal life...!!
thats the origin of my sad poems...!!
Save me from myself almighty
before I kill the dead soul of mine
these dried tears have had enough
now in my grave let me shine
Lovely poems quite dark and somewhat resounding my feeling right now...
gr8 work Pulkit...KEEP WRITING!!
@ dreamer - hey nainika! thanks for the visit finally and the vaulable comments! ur comments mean a lot to me!
:)
thanks a lot...
Of hate and anger if one has to choose
what would be your choice?
Stopping to move ahead with fear
I stand still to make this noise!
loved these lines :)
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