Sunday, January 18, 2009

THE SUN IS STILL BURNING!!















Emerged victorious from the struggle of the night,
the sun is still burning!
The world engulfs the warmth of its light,
but the sun is still burning!

Waves above on our heads with its might,
gives everyone pleasure and itself sacrifice
flowers blossom in its bright sunlight,
unnoticed it heals pains without a price!

Ashes of tormented dreams everywhere sworn,
unsuccessful aspirations! Untamed imaginations.
Choked on neck by the strength of dawn!
Nothing more but Immense pain of unjust expectations.

It cries for help but no one listens!
The poets that waked up with its rays,
sadly ignores its silent glistens.
Writes poetry on evening's praise!

Its there alone surrounded with wind,
the same one from which he saved the world...
throughout day without a grind!
nobody observes its falling blood.

It is the people for whom he fought,
that sleeps through the pleasant dreams.
when he gets strangulated with night's sword
ditcher is everyone from beloved stream.

Moaning and crying, setting to death...
the sun is still burning!
It loved you in its every breath,
but the sun is still burning!

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PULKIT
(15th january,2009,6:15 pm)




19 comments:

PULKIT said...

the very first shot of poetry irrespective of the lyrics of a song in this blog! a new attempt, just like the first ever book review of this medium! in my last post,
hope ur liking the various shades covered here!
this is a symbolically sad and tragic poem! with some hidden relevance! please comment and let me know if u would like to see more of poetry here on this blog by me or something else

rishabh said...

[i]awesome bhiya a really great work.!and really appreciative work.
actually whole poem was really fantastic but the 5th para was ..awful l..
great shot bhiya.!

paramveer said...

thats the performance!!!!!!! the imgination(i think nt imagination ...sm life too.....aint it??), words everything perfect!!!!!!!!!!

love to read some more.cant u put 1 in everywk....

LOL!!!!

Shalki Sharma said...

I am lacking words to appreciate it!!! Its perfect...You are versatile pulkit...May God bless you!Would like to see more poetry from ur desk!

ROHIT GOEL said...

a grt projection of feelings, emotions and thoughts...

third stanza means a lot and specificaly has a strong connection with u, me and all of us........

Am really enlightened to read such a thought provoking , poem after school days...

keep the spirits high!!!
god bless

PULKIT said...

@ rishab - thanks for the visit bro! keep visiting, i always need ur precious feedback!

@ paramveer - glad to hear the appreciation and motivation as always, thanks for the never ending support! i am so lucky to have you!

@ shalki - thanks for inspiring me to write more of these with your kind words...

@ rohit - thanks for the visit! i knew u will like those lines the most, its just there with both of us so many times in life...isnt it? thanks for the visit! keep providing me ur valuable feedback forever!

nikit said...

it lovd u in itz every breathe ,but d su is still burnin .........most touchin linz cn say ..n yeah d third stanza holdz a lot in it ...
a wonderful piece of poetry cumin al d way 4m u ...
u kno i was expectin it ..n der u r.....
uniquly u hav givn ur stamp to it by puutin up d lins dat mak u think agn ...gud wrk broo

PULKIT said...

thanks nikit for the motivation and hope that i always lives upto your expectations!

LAILA said...

Hi Pulkit..you are so young and you have managed to write such a wonderful poem!Great!Your blog is awesome as well!

sUnNy said...

seriously,just cant xpress it...
dat is awsome man,the imagination,the comand ovr lang n everythng
u've got the talent for a novel man...GO FOR IT

PULKIT said...

@ laila- thanks for the first visit to my blog! i am so glad u liked it! thanks for the age mention, made my day!
@ sunny- thanks to u too, for the first visit, hope to see you pretty often then!

Salman said...

well, I have always hated reading poems so won't be able to write anything constructive but all I can say is it is actually superb..I mean it was like one of those English Literature poems which I used to read during class 6th etc..those wordsworth types....I just hated those..

by the way the adsense ad in the sidebar talks about some prize for good poems...chk that out...but hey...don't click on it..its ur own site :)

rimsha said...

hmm.. a poem with sad feelings ,,but true,, the second last stenza is best of the ,,,take care

PULKIT said...

@ salman sir - ur comment ranged from ur hate from poetry to the near comparison to wordsworth! thanks for the visit and a tricky point as always, u wont ever change:)

@ rimisha - thanks for the visit dear! god bless ya!

Anonymous said...

its nice keep it up

PULKIT said...

thanks anonymous! person! hope to see u back on this page

Femin Susan said...

Hi....
Super...........Super...........
Nice poem and very beautiful picture...
cheers!

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keep working!!

PULKIT said...

too happy to hear this sir!
:)
thanks for the info!
its all your blessings sir!
just trying to do something more than just exsiting in life.. trying to live through this page! :)
glad to get this tremendously cheerful news!